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7411894 Lol
I love the story so far. But is this gonna be a long story with a lot of chapters or is it just gonna be a story with about 7-10 chapters?. Anyways I am glad that I finally found a TwiDash story that is in the making so I can follow it as It gets made.
A good story that you can follow the characters through and always be excited about a new chapter + Twidash = Adorable meter: OVER NINE THOUSAND xD
7421085 Thanks. And I hope to make it a long story. First goal is to hit 10.000 words 2 goal = 20.000 words 3 = 50.000 words, 4 goal= 100.000.
If I ever go get past 100.000 I'll have no idea how long I'll make it. And I don't know if it will ever even reach that amount of words.
But I'm going to try to make is at long as I can make it.
7421345
Nice to see that you dont plan on just quitting randomly in the middle of a story :) I really hate when authors do that and doesn't even say anything about them stopping the story, and just leaving it at "Incomplete".
Anyways I would love to give some criticism to help you but my eye for details in stories suck xD
The only thing I can say is that the story looks awesome and I can definitely see this becoming one of my favorite TwiDash stories :D
And I'm sure it will get 20% cooler as the story goes on and you get better at writing the story (Not saying that your not good but there is always room to get better :D)
May the horse be with you when you're writing xD
7423246 Thanks And even if I don't get to 100K words I sure as hell will make and end to the story!
I also hate it when people leave great story's unfinished or when good story's don't get that great of an end.
I do love this story, but my feedback?
Characters are wooden, word use is incorrect, grammar is eh.