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Awesome! New chapter! Reading it right away xD
I did see some mistakes:
ERROR:
''Cloud Cider? Does that even existed?''
FIX:
"Cloud Cider? Does that even exist?"
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''Oh don't worry about it Dash it was exactly kinda cute''
Dont you mean: "Oh don't worry about it Dash, it was actually kinda cute"
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Anyways Great chapter and I look forward to seeing more of this fanfic as it goes on :D
7424850 Thanks for pointing out those mistakes I'll fix them tomorrow,
As said in the Author's Note and my blog I always make these late at night since I write the best at late times, But this does mean I miss these things so don't be surprised If you do see them in the next chapter.
Anyway thank you again for pointing those out
7424850 I fixed them!
7426348
Nice. And I understand that you couldn't fix them yesterday when you wrote It. (or at least if your timezone is anywhere near mine) It was 1-2am in the morning when I read this chapter xD Screw Sleep when there is TwiDash xD
Wait a minute! This is your FIRST story?! I must say that I've seen better TwiDash fics than this but those people had many other stories when they wrote that. This looks VERY good for a first story :D I honestly thought you had wrote at least 2-4 stories before this. But this being a first story just makes you appreciate the story so much more :D
7426398 Thanks I put a lot of effort into the story
7426385 Well for me it was around 02:00. I always work on this story when it's late since I write the best when it's late.
7426348 do you have an editor and if so do they do anything? (I'm not hating on you, I swear.)