7317343 I know and I thank you all for that but I normal at least break up the paragraphs so its not a wall of text and a little easier to read for you guys who put up with all of my typos and grammar errors so I feel I should apologize to all of you when I cant even do something i'm able to do. Its the least I can do for you guys who read my crap.
FINALLY!!! My goddesses did you take forever to confess. "You dominated me completely and that is what queens find attractive." So chrysalis is into bdsm?
7317378 do you have a proofreader or an editor who looks for typos, cause you really do have alot. I like reading your stories but if a little fan help could smooth out those errors it would be worth it in my opinion.
Twilight smiled as she spoke. “Rather good, got a letter from Celestia that she is going on a diet.” She chuckled. “You know you are evil right?” The Queen said trying her best to hide her smile with her menu. “Eh I like to think of it as starting big.” Twilight said as she read the menu. “She should have known I wouldn’t pull any punches, now all that’s left is figuring things out for Luna.” The changeling Queen nodded and a few minutes later Twilight drink arrived and the waitress took their order. They talked about their days as the Queen had a far more interesting one do to meeting with the Captain in charge of the Liston Complex about how the repairs were going after the accident a few weeks ago. IT was after the meal and the days report had been given that the Queen finally spoke up. “So I don’t think my day was the reason we were meeting so what were you needing to talk to me about?” Chrysalis asked as she sipped her drink.
Both the alicorn and the Changeling queen looked around as they heard someone shout rather loudly. In the old clock tower a pink alicorn had dropped below the window, her hoof shoved in her mouth as she had not meant to shout that loudly. She had taken her daughter's advice and took a vacation, which mostly consisted of spying on a particle member of her family which most wouldn’t really see as a vacation but she was free to spend it how she wanted. And boy was she glad she did take this vacation otherwise she’d have missed this moment. After a few second the Princess of Love peeked over the window sill and brought the binoculars back up to her eyes as her magic raised the long range listing device she had borrowed from the Crystal guard supply room as she adjusted the head set so she could hear again. After finding no sign of who had shouted Twilight looked back at the Changeling queen. “You what?” She asked not entirely sure she had heard correctly.
srs Twi didn’t notice her???
Twilight blinked and opened her mouth before closing it. She did this several time as her mind tried to processes this information. She had never actually learned about changeling queen courtship as the drones it worked much the same as everyone else should they desire a special someone. Once more she had made a huge oversight when it came to her second in command.
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The Queen chuckled again. “I know but I’m sure this won’t be so bad and I don’t think things will really change, well not completely, I’m still you second in command and will speak up when I think you are doing something wrong and it’s not like I’m going to act really any different around you, I still have my pride as Queen of the changelings and second in command of the EDF.” She said.
Uhhh, Chrysalis basically just said that Twilight is now the second Queen of the changelings, omg how many titles does Twilight have?
- Commander Twilight Sparkle of the EDF. - Princess of Friendship. - Element of Magic. And now the second Queen of the changelings along with other titles I forget. Oh yeah and a Soilder if that is a title. Might as well squeeze in "Universal traveller".
On yeah I just realized, which all the pain and torture she has dealed with, she most likely has gained a high pain tolerance, with has been proven in the previous story with the artifacts and the electricity, or whatever they are, not sure what they are, but this means that she probably won't have to deal with much pain at birth, in fact I wouldn't be surprised if she refused to even numbing the pain, she would probably say "I ENDURE PAIN, NOT RUN AWAY FROM MY PROBLEMS!!!"
We don't care about the typos nor grammatical errors: You tell a compelling story and we appreciate it.
7317343 I know and I thank you all for that but I normal at least break up the paragraphs so its not a wall of text and a little easier to read for you guys who put up with all of my typos and grammar errors so I feel I should apologize to all of you when I cant even do something i'm able to do. Its the least I can do for you guys who read my crap.
Hahahahaha CADENCE IS A STALKER HAHAHAHAHA that made my day....
7317391 it seemed so appropriate with how I had her acting in her previous appearances
CTS yes dancing with her cybernetics? ...............
Cadacne took Sweetie Belle lessons didn't she.
Hey Commander, should have planted a camera in Tia's room.
FINALLY!!! My goddesses did you take forever to confess.
"You dominated me completely and that is what queens find attractive." So chrysalis is into bdsm?
7317911 no the changeling queen are about conquest and holding power.
CTS basicly has the completely and total loyalty of Chysalsi THST she will.do whatever told unless it is to harm the hive.
She will stand up as a queen but CTS basicly has control of everything and chysaly might as well be a drone.
If that males sense.
Basicly chrysaly has free will but she is much like a city THST an army not controlled. Conquered and doing as told
7317378 do you have a proofreader or an editor who looks for typos, cause you really do have alot. I like reading your stories but if a little fan help could smooth out those errors it would be worth it in my opinion.
7319331 currently know as mu editor had to quit do to life.
Though right now I have a situation so am.unable to bring on a new editor to staff as I have no way to send work to them or recover it when done.
Once my end is functioning I'll be finding an editor or 12 to fix my stories
“YES FINALLY!!!”
7317343 he is right!
Finally!
Cadance has much too much free time.
Their relationship is really interesting.
well GOD FUCKING DAMN IT CADENCE!!! JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!!!
Okay the grammar is bugging me to much I'm going too have someone fix the grammar on all of your stories at some point in the near future
7773468 that would help me out actually as I haven't been able to hunt for an Editor yet do to a few IRL things.
Hmm that would be difficult.
srs Twi didn’t notice her???
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i also gotta agree with this guy
Uhhh, Chrysalis basically just said that Twilight is now the second Queen of the changelings, omg how many titles does Twilight have?
- Commander Twilight Sparkle of the EDF.
- Princess of Friendship.
- Element of Magic.
And now the second Queen of the changelings along with other titles I forget.
Oh yeah and a Soilder if that is a title.
Might as well squeeze in "Universal traveller".
On yeah I just realized, which all the pain and torture she has dealed with, she most likely has gained a high pain tolerance, with has been proven in the previous story with the artifacts and the electricity, or whatever they are, not sure what they are, but this means that she probably won't have to deal with much pain at birth, in fact I wouldn't be surprised if she refused to even numbing the pain, she would probably say "I ENDURE PAIN, NOT RUN AWAY FROM MY PROBLEMS!!!"