During one of the girls slumber parties one of Sunset's secrets is discovered, a week later she finds herself at the hands of the mysterious Mare-Do-Well. But who is this new lover under the mask. M for Bondage, latex clothing, and lesbians.
7869121 7869218 Sorry about that guys, I think that happened because I accidentally hit publish when I didn't mean to and now that I mean to, and now that I did mean to, it didn't do it. Sorry about that but hey, you both wanna make a guess about who might be Mare-Do-Well? (Or Maiden-Do-Well, I don't care)
While tis is nice i still hope Sunset confronts her lousy friends on what they failed to do for her. Sorry been reading Amon A miss fics and few of them really point out how bad the rainbooms are as friends with Sunset in them.
no expecting anything of that level, jsut want to see the Rainbooms chewed up but good, and decently shamed. They can then make plans to make up for the crap they pulled.
put this into my tracking. I hope to see more of this. And maybe more for Don't Open Til Christmas. I kind of want to see how the rest of the night went...
I really hope thsi get updated soon. I'm really looking forward to see who this Mare Do Well is, and how she heals Sunset's broken heart.
Maybe it one of the Dazzlings.... Or could be Derpy..... Yeah i know but would be awesome! Derpy secret side, how she heals a broken heart with something besides Muffins.
While Anon a miss is a factor for a backstory to Sunset, it was not really what I had thought it was going to be. But good luck on your story and please don't let others criticism dissuade you from continuing it.
I think it is either Rainbow or Rarity because those two treated Sunset the worst even Applejack. But I doubt it's her. Even in the Equestria Girls universe Applejack is a bad lier.
I doubt it's one of the Humane 6, that would be too easy. I think it's Princess Twilight, note the phrasing "we're humans here." WE. I don't doubt that there are little clues sprinkled throughout this fic.
Huh, didn't get a notification for the new chapter.
7869121 I didn't get the notification either. That's really weird.
Also, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one.
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7869218 Sorry about that guys, I think that happened because I accidentally hit publish when I didn't mean to and now that I mean to, and now that I did mean to, it didn't do it. Sorry about that but hey, you both wanna make a guess about who might be Mare-Do-Well? (Or Maiden-Do-Well, I don't care)
This was great will the update be soon ?
7928139 I think so. Lately I haven't been able to write but hopefully that will change soon.
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Well good luck to you
7930729 Thanks. Also two things: 1. I like your avatar. 2. Do you have a guess about who our mysterious character is?
While tis is nice i still hope Sunset confronts her lousy friends on what they failed to do for her.
Sorry been reading Amon A miss fics and few of them really point out how bad the rainbooms are as friends with Sunset in them.
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Thanks i love my avatar i knew as soon as i saw it and as for the guess rarity because no one would expect the proper lady or would they ?
7932398 I guess we'll see
7931666 I'll try, just please don't expect it to big like Bittersweet or the Krampus crossover
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no expecting anything of that level, jsut want to see the Rainbooms chewed up but good, and decently shamed.
They can then make plans to make up for the crap they pulled.
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Or is it all of them working together ?!?!
7933527 Huh.
7933068 Alright.
put this into my tracking. I hope to see more of this. And maybe more for Don't Open Til Christmas. I kind of want to see how the rest of the night went...
I really hope thsi get updated soon. I'm really looking forward to see who this Mare Do Well is, and how she heals Sunset's broken heart.
Maybe it one of the Dazzlings.... Or could be Derpy..... Yeah i know but would be awesome!
Derpy secret side, how she heals a broken heart with something besides Muffins.
8139497 I am working on and seeing Derpy wouldn't be a crazy thing...and her having some involvement is in the realm of possibility.
I have never seen a clopfic Anon-a-miss fanfic before, this should be an interesting experience.
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Someone had to try it. So I said why not.
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Oh? Why so?
While Anon a miss is a factor for a backstory to Sunset, it was not really what I had thought it was going to be. But good luck on your story and please don't let others criticism dissuade you from continuing it.
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I'm sorry. Thank at least for giving it a chance and the well wish.
I think it is either Rainbow or Rarity because those two treated Sunset the worst even Applejack. But I doubt it's her. Even in the Equestria Girls universe Applejack is a bad lier.
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That is a good point that she can't lie if she's asked about being Maiden-Do-Well
I doubt it's one of the Humane 6, that would be too easy. I think it's Princess Twilight, note the phrasing "we're humans here." WE. I don't doubt that there are little clues sprinkled throughout this fic.
So... not wanting to bug you but uh...when's the next chapter?
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It's dead. Lol jk I'm just struggling with the ending.
Interesting story can't wait for the next chapter