I think Susnet need to chew out her friends and tell them off for hurting her.

Also tel off Trixie remind her she nearly killed them withthe trap door. Dazzlings or not effecting her.

7836206 I can promise you that it will come up later.

Yes....... um......... MORE PLZ!!!! IS NOW DRUG NEED MORE!!!

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they need to realize just how bad they FUBAR thier friendship with Sunset, and readingher Dairy was another one.

7836504 again Diablo, it will be delt with.

7836474 working on it now. Glad you like it.

Looks good so far. How often will you update the chapters?

7838262 honestly, I'm working on the second chapter now but I can't give you an accurate time table. Sorry.

7837297 Yes, you found the inspiration for this name. lol

You has my attention with this.

It was a good start, if somewhat rushed. Could've been slowed a little with more detail to the reveal scene. Easily could've been an extra 1k words.

But, that said, the characterisations that were presented felt spot on.

As a sub myself I'm curious to read the rest of this fic. I hope it will be safe and consensual loving BDSM rather than just abuse.

7840437 first, I am glad that you like the story . The answer to your question will be answered in the next chapter, and I hope you can bare with me a little with how Mare-Do-Well will be presented in this context (as well as universe). The reveal was a challenge cause I've been working on all of this for a while, but the reveal of her in Sunset's room had about six different versions, three of which took place outside in a few choice locations. After a while I just decided on the last one for reasons that again will be revealed in the next chapter.

7842136 I'll keep that in mind, and thank you for replying, as I said you definitely have my attention and I do look forward to the next chapter.

More soon!

7853686 will do.

My first guess is Rarity. Just saying.