Even a jaded hitman needs friends. Join Ken'ichi "Samael" Sammuels as he learns to end lives for more noble causes than just lining his pockets. He might even learn to love more than himself, his weapons, and his fighting skill.
I have no problem with the length of the chapter. Rather I prefer them long so I can enjoy them. I do have one question/complaint. Why did you nerf Fluttershys breast size? It's kind of a running gag that she has the largest breasts the only ponies surpassing her being the princesses. With Pinkie coming very close to her size. It's also a running gag that her large breasts contribute to her shyness.
7166461 Glad you liked it. I'll try to stay around 8-10k per to make it easy on editors when they sign on, but no promises.
I was worried that someone would say something like that, but it's all about what I like, really. I like petite ladies and I like the idea of a petite Fluttershy. Besides, I wanted to do something not a whole lot of others do.
7166447 loved this chapter keep up more like it and i like lenghy chapters 7166461 incase u don't know or remember the shy ones always have de biggest breast, anime logic 101 right their
Bah, didn't even notice I had a continuity error in there. Originally, I had Discord teleport Samael out of the hospital after teasing the Doctor, but then her dialogue didn't flow and it didn't mesh at all with Discord's request that Samael not mention his involvement. So, Applejack's just making Evel Kneivel leaps of logic. She's smarter than she sounds, I'd say.
Poor Sam, part of me though this one will be a bit slow, with him being an assassin and be train to not gain to much attention but, well Discord happen.
Also, just curious, in this world there is a very low rate of stallions? in the show almost all the guards are males, and the only doctor was male too, but here, it looks like the entire world is female…well that can be the case there is the term herd. Just wondering, because the may six look to be ready to be fuck if Sam just say a pretty please. OH! I it will be so great if Cadence appear and she is the one that explain the herd thing to Sam, nothing romantic just tell him what happen and how Shining Armor actually had the entire royal maid in the crystal empire as his personal herd, as well as her. Man Sam will be so happy for the news and her green light to plot any mare he wish
P.S: Is the clop coming soon? If so, can it be Fluttershy? I just though that it will be hilarious if she take first turn.
7168324 Well, he's trying, and that's important. For all his snarl, he truly does want to be free of having to watch his back for the fuzz.
And all will be revealed shortly and I do have plans for Cadence telling him about herds, actually.
P.S. Clop will be happening relatively soon, but it will be somewhat muted/R-rated and won't technically involve Samael. But once he gets involved? Fun times.
And I'm going to be totally honest here. The cover are is just a cropped picture of Hitman's Agent 47 promotional art. It was the best I could find to represent the cold-blooded efficiency that Samael was about before Equestria.
7168784 Good, good that all I need to know. So this is like a kind of 'last mission' then clean page for him? no more contracts, no more assassin, just track down the psyco that is causing all this pain and then hello relax life?
7168826 More or less, yes. And if he gets a few friends and lovers along the way, that's all for the better. After all, it'll give him incentive to not go dark again.
And you just know that Celestia is a sucker for redemption. After all, look at Discord.
7168842 Celestia and Discord are an item here! wow, that is just impressive and…oh wait, right…Discord doesn't have a sex, I didn't say anything. Also great, oh I can't wait for him to go job hunting, I bet he either decided to teach others to defend themselves, open a center of Krag Maga, freelancer as a body guard, or…well anything actually he could be a chef, it will be nice to be a chef.
But the job hunting will be histerical, all the female bosses a just seconds of drooling and only be able to say 'when can you start' (and I'm not taking about their mouths if you get my point wink, wink)
Hey! I have a question but I better send it to you in PM in case its a good idea
7169180 To be fair, either my dumb joke will be a minichapter or it'll be a oneshot later based on the same rules of the universe. But he will jobhunt, be it inside a larger chapter or a minichapter.
Or one of my favourites, Celestia and Luna walking inside a building and someone say 'well, well, well, here comes the sun' then look behind them and check their flanks before looking at the sisters again and say 'and the moon is gorgeous too'
“Uuuh. Thank you, I grew it myself.” ‘DAMMIT!’ Samael tried not to cringe at himself.
And he is now and forevermore voiced by KaiserNeko in my head.
If the consensus is that this chapter's on the long side, I'll attempt to bring it down in the future, but if everyone likes it, I'll try to keep it up.
Long chapters are best chapters.
Enjoying it so far. Though I'm wondering if it's just gonna be gryphon's that'll rack up his kill count...
“Hmm, let’s see. Well, you’re on the edge of a peaceful little hamlet called Ponyville,” Discord was cut off by a snort of mirth from the assassin, “Oh, I know, but I know for a fact that there’s actually a Humanville where you come from, so don’t act like a bastion of creativity. Now, if I can continue. The majority of inhabitants of this town are what are known as ponies. I know what that sounds like to you, but it’s not what you think. They walk on two legs just like you, they talk just like you if a great deal less foul-mouthed, and...Well, better keep that a surprise...BUT! Suffice to say, they are much like humans in a number of ways, but they tend to be less...Confrontational than humanity. As a whole.”
As a Québécois myself, I found Ken'iki's interaction with the hospital staff particularly funny. Thanks author, and bonjour from the country of the Fleur-De-Lys!
Comment posted by Whitescorpion deleted Oct 16th, 2016
I absolutely love this chapter my friend!
I can't wait to see the next chapter!
7166432 Awesome. Going to start work on it once the second chapter of Sun Gives Light to the Moon is done and posted.
I have no problem with the length of the chapter. Rather I prefer them long so I can enjoy them. I do have one question/complaint. Why did you nerf Fluttershys breast size? It's kind of a running gag that she has the largest breasts the only ponies surpassing her being the princesses. With Pinkie coming very close to her size. It's also a running gag that her large breasts contribute to her shyness.
7166461 Glad you liked it. I'll try to stay around 8-10k per to make it easy on editors when they sign on, but no promises.
I was worried that someone would say something like that, but it's all about what I like, really. I like petite ladies and I like the idea of a petite Fluttershy. Besides, I wanted to do something not a whole lot of others do.
7166447 loved this chapter keep up more like it and i like lenghy chapters
7166461 incase u don't know or remember the shy ones always have de biggest breast, anime logic 101 right their
Bah, didn't even notice I had a continuity error in there. Originally, I had Discord teleport Samael out of the hospital after teasing the Doctor, but then her dialogue didn't flow and it didn't mesh at all with Discord's request that Samael not mention his involvement. So, Applejack's just making Evel Kneivel leaps of logic. She's smarter than she sounds, I'd say.
Poor Sam, part of me though this one will be a bit slow, with him being an assassin and be train to not gain to much attention but, well Discord happen.
Also, just curious, in this world there is a very low rate of stallions? in the show almost all the guards are males, and the only doctor was male too, but here, it looks like the entire world is female…well that can be the case there is the term herd. Just wondering, because the may six look to be ready to be fuck if Sam just say a pretty please.
OH! I it will be so great if Cadence appear and she is the one that explain the herd thing to Sam, nothing romantic just tell him what happen and how Shining Armor actually had the entire royal maid in the crystal empire as his personal herd, as well as her. Man Sam will be so happy for the news and her green light to plot any mare he wish
P.S: Is the clop coming soon? If so, can it be Fluttershy? I just though that it will be hilarious if she take first turn.
Faboulous
Can't wait for more!
That guy looks badass. Is he badass? I gotta read this, I gotta read this!
Hey, awesome coverart. It gives me chills whenever I come across it!
7168324 Well, he's trying, and that's important. For all his snarl, he truly does want to be free of having to watch his back for the fuzz.
And all will be revealed shortly and I do have plans for Cadence telling him about herds, actually.
P.S. Clop will be happening relatively soon, but it will be somewhat muted/R-rated and won't technically involve Samael. But once he gets involved? Fun times.
7168676 Yes, he is meant to be very badass and evoke images of various assassins in media. My favorite is John Wick from the titular movie starring Keanu Reeves. But I also like Martin Blank from Grosse Pointe Blank starring John Cusack.
And I'm going to be totally honest here. The cover are is just a cropped picture of Hitman's Agent 47 promotional art. It was the best I could find to represent the cold-blooded efficiency that Samael was about before Equestria.
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Good, good that all I need to know. So this is like a kind of 'last mission' then clean page for him? no more contracts, no more assassin, just track down the psyco that is causing all this pain and then hello relax life?
That is the end game right?
7168826 More or less, yes. And if he gets a few friends and lovers along the way, that's all for the better. After all, it'll give him incentive to not go dark again.
And you just know that Celestia is a sucker for redemption. After all, look at Discord.
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Celestia and Discord are an item here! wow, that is just impressive and…oh wait, right…Discord doesn't have a sex, I didn't say anything.
Also great, oh I can't wait for him to go job hunting, I bet he either decided to teach others to defend themselves, open a center of Krag Maga, freelancer as a body guard, or…well anything actually he could be a chef, it will be nice to be a chef.
But the job hunting will be histerical, all the female bosses a just seconds of drooling and only be able to say 'when can you start' (and I'm not taking about their mouths if you get my point wink, wink)
Hey! I have a question but I better send it to you in PM in case its a good idea
7169110 Nah, Discord is sexless and I likes me some Amazoness Celestia, so that's gonna be a thing.
And I'm still planning the job hunting, really. I have a joke lined up for it too. Just wait and see.
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you have my word dude I will wait
7169180 To be fair, either my dumb joke will be a minichapter or it'll be a oneshot later based on the same rules of the universe. But he will jobhunt, be it inside a larger chapter or a minichapter.
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ah like this one?
je…jeje hey Myyyyystery……………………… 'Praise the sun'
Or one of my favourites, Celestia and Luna walking inside a building and someone say 'well, well, well, here comes the sun' then look behind them and check their flanks before looking at the sisters again and say 'and the moon is gorgeous too'
7168797 That full picture gives me more chills!!!!!
And he is now and forevermore voiced by KaiserNeko in my head.
Long chapters are best chapters.
Enjoying it so far. Though I'm wondering if it's just gonna be gryphon's that'll rack up his kill count...
7189246 There might be turncoats on all sides. I'm not 100% sure yet. And Diamond Dogs always make easy villains.
Humansville.
As a Québécois myself, I found Ken'iki's interaction with the hospital staff particularly funny. Thanks author, and bonjour from the country of the Fleur-De-Lys!