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7150787 Danke. Working on the next chapter as I type this. I be a writer.

I guessed as much on the weapons, because stick mags were very popular for automatic weapons back then, and certain models of the MP40 used folding wire stocks

When you say that this story has sex, what do you mean?

This is getting really amazing. Are you going to ship kenichi with normal pony or maybe the two sisters. Hit me up if you neen help

7151002 It will later. Also, the casual sexual harassment between Samael and Moira should be enough to justify it for the Prologue alone.

7150971 Bravo. I may not have a collection at all because I have no monies, but I am a huge gun enthusiast. I love me some gun porn and I will be researching what I don't know to coincide with what I do know.

Friend of mine constantly brags about having fired a Tommy and I get so jelly.

But I REALLY want to fire an AS Val. Thing is whisper quiet. All you really hear is the impact of the round and the clickety clack of its inner workings.

7151012 Oh, I'ma ship him with a lot o' ponies cause I REALLY like herd dynamics.

Oh and he'd kill you for that at this point. He prefers Samael because he has a hard-on for the symbolism.

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Fukin awesome. I love storys like that. Definitely adding to favourites. Like i said, you need any help proof reading or stuff hit me up.
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This looks good. I'll keep an eye for future chapters

7151065 Working on it. Got 8k words in Chapter 1 so far. And a preview up on my blog.

So if the gryphonsame are the bad guys does that mean nobe would be adedcto his herd?

7153473 I never said that. Not ALL of them are bad. Just most of them that'll be featured. For the most part, Griffins as a whole are neutral, but there'll be an explanation for why some are being jerks.

7153627 An amazing beginning to an amazing story my friend.

7155495 And it'll only get bigger and better as I go. Already at more than twice the size of the Prologue for Chapter 1. 12k words and almost done and ready for editting.

When all the mess is over can Lindsay go to Equestria? she will be perfect as Celestia assistant, or Luna assistant, or hell something else entirely

7161706 Ahh, no. I'm afraid not. She would never take the deal, even if it meant seeing her ex-boss happy for once in his life. She would want to stay with her family.

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Too bad, but hey at least he can come to visit and say hi

This is awesome so far! I look forward to reading more.

Dear Lindsay,

It's been quite a time. Have a fun time without me and don't stick your nose where it doesn't belong anymore. Enjoy the money, all the taxes have been taken care of by Sid. Oh, and find a good guy to give you a good dicking since I won't be around to offer any more.

I Set You Free,

Ken'ichi

This really made me sad. Even though he joked with her he still really cares for her. I like this. I will read on!

This story is gonna be good I can already tell

After he left to dress and hit the sack, his reflection stayed behind and gave a crooked smile, eyes flashing to the same mismatched eyes on the camera monitors, 'Oh yes, you'll get the job done and make sure I'm not taken for granite, won't you? I'll need to spin it so you want to do it, but that will be all too easy. After all, a job is a job and you won't rest until it's finished.' The reflection in the mirror swirled as it morphed into a laughing Discord before fading.

Mercy? He is a Professional, so.... Pray for you...