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R.I.P Rarity.the most Generous, kind, loving and beautiful person who ever lived. May her soul rest in peace.
NO.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
it is a sign for the new queen or king to be crowned." She looked at Nyralith, whose eyes were drawn down with concentration. "Follow?"
ehm, think you meant lily there, otherwise awesome done
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Shit, thank you.
*EDIT*
Fixed! Thanks for pointing that out.
hey, no problemos mate, gotta say LOVE the story and wish many more to come in future.
my own story kinda flatlined a bit, writers block ? .. heh .
sad spart is sad...
Killing Rarity... bold move loyal, bold move.
I'm not sure how I feel about that, I really like Rarity.
Other than that, this chapter was amazing, but I'll have to get back to you about the Rarity part.
i would like to see something written in the future regarding rarity's final battle
GOD DAME THESE CLIFFHANGERS AND TEASERS AND ALL THAT SHIT YOU WRITERS R THROWING AT US!!!
I CAN KISS MY SLEEP GOOD BYE, I´M GONNA HAVE MY MIND IN YOUR FANFIC, LOYAL. PLZ, BE GENTLE, BE GENTLE WITH MY NERVES LOYAL...
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Surprisingly enough, I followed my sister's notes on this chapter. She was pretty clear what she wanted to happen.
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It will be written in great detail next chapter.
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Mission accomplished.
I find if I leave my readers frazzled, waterlogged, tear-stained, depressed and crazy at the end of a chapter, they usually come back for the next one.
Means I can go all weekend without writing so when I come back, you're all suffering withdrawal symptoms and shivering like addicts.
I love it.
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There should be a support group for people who read this.
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I'd like to think said support group is right here, in the comments section.
Goodness knows I've dropped enough spoilers (Like little Ketamine pills) to keep you all from scratching your eyes out inbetween updates.
How you all ever lived through my vacation a few weeks ago is beyond me.
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meth and cocaine, it was a rough week.
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Glad to see my fucking avatar finally changed back.
Gawd my OC is ugly...
I'm going to bed.
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yes, keep that picture
1201157 Loyal, you are a really mean minie, but your writing covers that
1201157 thanks
Did you put a lot thougth into the whole " changeling prime" thing?
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Admittedly, I was following my sister's notes. Kind of hard to write for someone who's gone.
I am in shock and disgust and fascination at what has transgressed here today. I cried manly tears of sorrow, for a grand ally and friend has been lost this day. May Rarity be remembered in the hearts and minds of all for her heroic deeds. Rest peacefully, Heroine.
You're wanking the chain, she ain't dead . . . right? This is getting so much more confusing, I enjoyed the days when it was nothing more than anthromorphic ponies doing anthromorphic ponies. Now we got more death and combat and stuff.
Awesome job from taking this to being simply porn to porn with plot (hah, see what I did there?)
Nyra died... I hate you, FOREVER!
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edit: And Rarity?!?! This is the closest I've been to rage hating a story.
THAT ENDING HAD ME ALL LIKE
even the great and glorious conquest would be mad at that!
God DAMNIT Loyal, this story isn't supposed to make me tear up!
I am impressed loyal. I'll admit, when I heard about your future plans, I almost squee'd. I loved your story and your writing, and clop is enjoyable, but I am so glad to see the focus changing to adventure and discovery and such. I look forward to seeing the world you plan to show us.
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While The Lost Chapters was primarily sex, Melody's Tale will be more adventure, discovery, and story. Much like the finale. And I'm hoping to add some body to what there already is with The Untold Chapters by offering new perspectives on all the things happening. Twilight's portion of the story will shed a LOT of light on some foggy areas of the story. And if I can get around to it, the princesses may have a few chapters of their own. I'm toying with the idea.
Thank you for your devoted reading. It means much to me.
I would like to let you know that i am very angery with you. And you are in no way to change anything with your story despite in how absoulutly pissed off i am right now.
this is true hatred my friend, because here I sit, staring at my laptop, almost midnight, having read your story a mere 6 hours eariler today, and i feel a strange sense of anger and misery beacause of that ending. I again must remind you to change nothing with the story or try and do a 'ressurcetion' type thing to try and make me happy, because you and this story are above such vulgar plot twists.
i will need to go to work tommorow, and i have been partying for the past two days and need my sleep. yet i feel this strong hatred to for, it is ever so undying and it frightens me. Do not change a thing Loyal, it was a good read. and this and the last chapter have been nothing short than A+++ work. and the rest of the story shall no doubt be nothing but steller.
the rage.... this overwhelming rage, it has overpowered me.... i need something, me, the veiwers, perhaps even you need something.......
we need......... closure
or maybe......... perhaps all i need is a "Different Kind of Death"
Rarity, you will be missed...... but perhaps for a differnt reason....
keep the radar on loyal, and keep writing
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Anger?
Rage?
Pure, seething hatred?
Mission accomplished.
Wait til next chapter, fucker.
1210645 im writing soemthing. expect it in the mail.....
you know, im thinking that we are in an abusive relationship. i mean, you have cut one of my request, then fused the other one into a big one with a bunch of other request, only to cut said request as well.
THEN you walk in here like a bigshot and are all like "I'z killed RArity!" and you gave me a heart attack.
and do you know what? after all that abuse, im still coming back and reading, infact. I'm spending the better part of the day writing YOU something!
so i love you, but fuck my back hurts because i am whipped!
then suddenly, the six paths of Pain.
WHY?!?!?!? WHY KILL RARITY OFF?!?!?!