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Just a dude. Writes horsewords... with varying regularity.

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awsome, cant you make one where Celestia wisits Lily like a week after she opens "Maggie´s"

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I'll put it on my list. Thanks for the request!

Derpy, possibly? I'd ask that it's a M/F clop instead of a F/F like this one.
Just a request, accept or deny, I'm putting it out there.

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Will do, it's on the list.
There is, unforuntately, quite a long list of requests ahead of you. But I rather expected this, so, yeah :P

757789 Meh, with great power comes great responsibility.
And clopping.

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I begin work on request one of four tonight at work. It's an OC, so we'll just see how it goes >.>
After that, though, it's Derpy and Celestia. Then another OC. That I'm surprisingly excited about writing.
Yeah.
Enjoy.

(*Thank you Kind Sir for your information on this :) HAVE NICE DAY!
:trollestia:

Impressive as always, though the lack of what you needed going into it could be felt. It was definitely short, but the most romantic encounters certainly are sometimes.

It was a very sweet story, and with what you had to go on, you certainly made it sweeter over creepy, given Daniel's request.

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I intend for these chapters to be very short and to-the-point. More of my indulgent clop-fest than focusing on any story of any sort. No, I'm afraid Lily's story has drawn to and end. All that's left are the tales of all the *ahem* tail she's going to net.

awsome storie, easy a A rank

Dude...That was AWESOME...
Seriously...That was perfect

"Nothing super hardcore, but I do have my girlfriend to thank for turning me on to it."
your girlfriend?

this was actually quite emotional:fluttercry: and in a good way mind you:yay:
to be able to see your dead love again.... i'm guessing by the burn on his shoulder she died in a fire?

great chapter btw, love this request thing your doing!

Three way with Twilight and Fluttershy. All the way.

That's all I care about.

I couldn't see any mistakes in this fic, maybe your just a great writer:derpytongue2:

and sucks man. i know the feel of 14 hour shifts. it is hell:pinkiesick:

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Indeed. My girlfriend. I have one. And she's into that stuff. She told me to check out kink.com
So I did.
And I love her all the more for it.
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Lily male, female or otherwise?

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Female sounds good to me :rainbowkiss:

Since, you’ve asked for requests here’s a rather unusual one, but the idea sounded pretty good in my head, so I decided to share it: Ben (Maggie’s ex) pays the brothel a visit. Maybe he heard that the place has a pretty good reputation and decided to check it out, not knowing that the name isn’t just a coincidence
(“Maggie, eh? I once knew a girl with that name, probably already death. So about your services…”
You probably can see why I called it an unusual request: Ben’s chances of having sex are slower than the survival rate of snowballs in hell.

It’s a bit difficult to talk about the story, since there’s no on-going plot. It’s just a collection of one-shoots about Lily and her customers having sex. On the one hand I’ll miss the one-going storyline on the other hand it seems to be like you’re trying to give the characters more deep. At least that’s what I got from the interactions between Lily and her customers. Maybe it’s due to the fact the she no longer hides her true self.

Especially the second chapter with the OC was somewhat different from the rest. It had an unusual amount of romantic and sadness. Don’t get me wrong but usually it’s just about Lily having some fun with someone. But here we have a guy who asked Lily to take the shape of his death wife and then they’re dancing I certainly didn’t expect that.

The Celestia chapter was a strong contrast to the above one. Maybe it’s just me but there’s something funny about the idea that the ruler of Equestria wants to be dominated. As for her character: I think you did a good job with her portrayal. Although, now I want to know why she felt the need to introduce Twilight o hard-core bondage. I don’t strikes me as the kind of thing she would teach her on a whim.

Not much to say about the Luna chapter. It was good, I like the sex scene and I didn’t found anything to complain about.

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I like the idea of your request, but, well...

-= MASSIVE SPOILER ALERT =-

I was planning on writing Maggie's story separately, as I have stated earlier, and there was something rather important I was planning.
Ben actually died of an overdose a few years before the events of A Different Kind of Love and was the catalyst for Maggie's move to Ponyville.

On another note:
Many of the characters are circumstantially the way they are. Celestia almost certainly isn't the type of woman to be dominated, and wouldn't introduce her star pupil to bondage (though if you picked up on it, this was Celestia's first anal experience) at all. The characters are the way they are to make the story interesting for myself, and therefore easier to write. Nowhere in canon or fanon do many of the characteristics I base my interpretation of Hasbro's characters even exist. It's almost purely circumstantial, and only because it helps me write more in depth.

As usual, I value your advice greatly. Thank you for the read, Yonasomun. I hope you enjoyed :twilightsheepish:

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I'll put it on the list.

can you do a big mac(:eeyup:)XLilys chapter? oh and your doing a good job keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

Please write a LillyxAloexLotus chapter. I've been dying to hear about it since you metioned flexable.

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That's some original content I planned on writing as soon as I founded A Different Kind of Love: The Lost Chatpers. It will be included sometime in the future, possibly inbetween requests. Which I have a ton of, surprisingly. I'll start fitting them inbetween requests soon enough ^.^ I've been dying to write that chapter.

this was pretty good :pinkiehappy: have a cupcake :pinkiecrazy:

Derpy is your least favorite!?!:rainbowhuh:

Could I request a chapter with Vinyl and Octavia. If you write that i will give you all the moustaches.:pinkiehappy::moustache::moustache:

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Afraid so. Only because EVERYONE In fanon portrays her as a stupid, scatterbrained idiot, and get offended when she's called mentally retarded or some other disability. I think of her more as a klutzy, spacey girl, not the kind to just mess up and say "Derp" or "I'm retarded." I think of her more along the lines of Yui Hirasawa from K-ON than as many people in fanon portray her. Needless to say, not a huge fan of Derpy. I'm sorry?
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As much as I could care less about mustaches, I shall put your request on the list. Would you like Lily to portray herself as Vinyl or Octavia?

787381 hmm, so hard to choose,I know, BOTH!. Vinyl is the crazy one, so she drags Octavia to maggie's for a bit of "fun"
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So... You want a threesome with Vinyl, Octavia, and Lily...?
Or would you just like me to write an independent ship with Octavia and Vinyl?

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threesome! lesbian threesome is best threesome! (you sir are getting watched!)

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*Sigh*
I'll put it on the list. :ajbemused:

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if you don't want to write it at all or you want to do something different, please feel free. So far, I've liked everything you put up and anything you write under duress won't be as good.
(I'm sorry to say the Derpy chapter is not your best work, still good though)

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Heh. As stated previously, I'm not a fan of Derpy. I'm surprised at the length of the chapter, and indeed, all my work as of late. I have much time to get around to your request, I'm sure I'll think of something. I would recommend being more specific in the future, however... As with "Midnight Waltz," I take quite a bit creative license when confronted with an unspecific request. Still, Vinyl/Tavi isn't my favorite pairing, but it's up there. I'm sure I'll come up with something ^.^

in that case pretend I never asked

cudos to you for not using the "OH eat my muffin!" line when they were doing the sex. i liked it:derpytongue2:

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I'm doing the final proofread and edit on your chapter now. Keep an eye peeled in the next ten minutes or so ^.^

haven read it yet, but huge :yay:

Hmm, interesting read.

this clop was absoultly perfect! the kind of thing of which i dreamed since i was small....
lily had to go save the day
by getting conquest laid
and in the end she had enjoyed it more than she thought!

:pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

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I've never heard of Dark Conquest before, so you got him perfectly as far as I'm concerned :twilightsmile:
though really, sounds like a neat character, and this was a good chapter.

This is my first time commenting on your story so I should add here that I really like it, and there are only two clopfics I'm okay with (though I'm not sure this counts as clop...), so hat's off to you good sir.

I haven't read all the comments, so I'm not sure if this has been asked for already, but I think you should have Lily and Twilight have another go at it. You seemed to be kinda hinting at it in Twilight's chapter anyway, so I think it would fit. This is less of a request, and more of a suggestion. Also, more of the best pony makes stories better.

And finally, I'm not asking for a Lyra chapter, but if you ever do one please throw in something along the lines of "Lily had never been with someone this good with their hands"

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As a matter of fact, I have two chapters with Twilight on my request list. You can view the list on my blog entry. I've yet to recieve a Lyra request, so I shall add that. I suspect it will be a week or two before I get around to it.

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

How did I take so long to realize you had finished my request?! :raritydespair: (one day, but still)
Anyways, I think it's cool that you did this despite the fact that you said it was something difficult for you as Derpy wasn't necessarily one of your favorites. I enjoyed this chapter anyway, especially the ending. You always seem to find nice little endings that make me smile or chuckle a bit, just because they're really light-hearted and cheery.
Thanks again! OwO

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I'm sorry! I normally send a PM out when I finish a request >.< Still, glad you liked it ^.^

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