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great chapter again ! oh and an intresting authors note! the ADKoL chapters reads like a well planned ahead story ... so i wonder that you hammer out the "story" on the fly. anyway, great fun to read! keep up the good work Loyal!
Awww, you skipped over the best part.
Is this being turned into a four parter!? Excuse me for a second while I scream like a little girl who just married Justin Beiber....
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Three parts, buddy XD Last one's just gonna be my guilty pleasure over-the-top crazy/insane orgy BDSM party cumfest.
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so you're just going to skip over the rest of that night as well stop skipping over the parts I want to read man, not cool.
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Oh no. Nononono. I never said Twilight would be getting ANY breaks. My plan for the last chapter is this: All through the rest of the night and into the next day, where Lily has a pretty damn big surprise planned, and all through the next night.
If that makes any sense. I just woke up. Tired.
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Maybe my Idea, but Loyal took it a bit further than I expected (in a good way), and is the only one deserving of credit for this.
Also, I'm less inventive than you may think, my thought process was "how can I get Loyal to write more Twilight... I know! Tons of bdsm... and if that doesn't work... MORE BDSM!"
another fantastic chapter! although i'm not sure i'm allowed another request (i'm sure each this request will end up counting as three by the end) and i have no idea when you're doing the pinkie pie one. i'm just putting this here cause it's another one i'd want to see and am surprised that no one has doen this yet so i feel obligated to bring it into veiw:
spike x rarity(lily) obviously will probably take place as one of her first customers, and is more so he can live his secret fantasy of doing it with the mare he has had a crush with since he was a kid.
like i said, don't know if i've requested too much, just though you can't end this without the dragon. (fyi, feel free to ignore this, but most lizards actually have two phalluses)
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Sadly enough, Spike left when he was but a teen. The CMC's are older than he was when he left for the century-long nap. (In this story, at least.) So, there's the age thing. Your Pinkie Pie chapter will happen, but it's at the very bottom of my list. I'm still hashing out the details of how I want it to work.
1033118 ah, i see.
OH WELL
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what?
Oh, no, what I'm saying is that you are time skipping over the parts that I want to read the most. For instance, when Lily is walking Twilight around for a second time. You built that up perfectly, then it just skipped to the next part of the story... I think you might be trolling.
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O.O What part was that at? I don't remember writing it T-T
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A little past halfway through.
"Come on. Can't showcase my pet if she won't walk outside." Lily smiled and turned to Brenda, waiting nearby. Her, and every other girl in the establishment... Brenda extended her arm, offering Lily a very familiar device. "Thank you, Brenda." Lily hoisted the offering, smiling at Twilight. She had stopped, eyes wide open at the sight of what Lily held in her hands. "Time to take the dog for a walk."
Then it just goes to Lily talking to Maggie. it was the perfect buildup for that scene, I swear, you must be doing this to mess with people.
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Oh that's riiiiight... I didn't want to write out Twilight walking around in the basement with all the girls fawning over her... Later on, Twilight admits how many time she cums, but that's about all I got into that scene for. She was tied up with the big bud inside of her, too... Walking around with a knot at her entrance. Hrm... I may re-edit that in later. Perhaps. Not sure.
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Considering that this is the chapter I requested... can I request that you do?
Still entirely up to you, I won't mind if you decide not to.
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As I said, I probably will at a later date. I want to at least finish this request out. Which I'm too tired to do right now. So I'll do at work tonight. *Sigh*