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That last part with the cookies! combo!
Good to see that you are still writing chapters, and still at the high quality that I have come to expect. (no pun intended, no really)
Just a couple things to point out.
At the beginning Lily said they weren't customers, went on to talk about them as if they are customers for one sentence but not the others, and then said that they are customers two paragraphs down. might have been me misreading things, but that seemed a bit off.
The cakes already have names. I know that the wife's is cup, I forget the husband's.
OH GOD, DON'T EAT THE COOKIES. No surprise that the whores like them
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I think I remember something about "Ohey, these guys don't really look like customers... Okay, maybe they really ARE customers... No, wait, maybe they aren't..." My failure at showing Lily's shifting opinion on the two.
And creative license >.> I already changed Granny Smith's name, fukkit, let's do the others!
a perfect ending to a perfect clop. i'll have another cookie please!!
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That's what I thought it was, just wasn't sure if it was a mistake.
AS long as you don't mess with the mane six names, I don't think people will really care that much. I've seen too many fics with "Twilight Coranora Sparkle" or what have you, it makes me cringe.
Looks like Pinkie ain't the only one being kinky.
l. o. l.
Those cookies XD!
On a different note, are you still taking suggestions for new chapters?
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Suggestions? No. My style is my own, and I write how I please.
Requests?
Yes. Oh, dear Celestia, yes. Requests are open until August 7th, as I'm taking a week-long trip and after that, I plan on finishing the story outright.
Requests, that's the word i was looking for! For some reason I couldnt think of the word lol.
My own stupidity aside, do you think you could make one about Vinyl Scratch? Perhaps a bit of kinky electrical play after a particularly taxing night at the club ? Thanks for at least considering in advance!
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You can check my blog for a list of requests, completed works, and updates on my progress in general. Vinyl Scratch is on the list, shortly after this short Big Mac/Cheerilee/Lily chapter. But it isn't going to happen the way everyone thinks it is >.>
Another one of those "Oh God why am I writing this?" Sort of chapters.
Bahaha that endin
I can't believe there hasn't been a single request for the great and powerful trixie yet... So here I request a Trixie chapter.