780796 Its a metaphor for the act she has to put on, because there are clowns in circuses, and clowns put on an act? GOD DAMN I'M FUNNY! My proof reader said I should be careful of metaphors and that they only work in poems, shoulda listened.
PM me if you don't want to spoil in comments, but does this have a happy ending? i understand it can be sad, but i don't want to read if there is no happy ending. also include the name of the story if you can, in case it has been a while and im not sure who responded back anymore at that time. that is if you op to PM me and not in comments
Good Chapter, although it would be good if some of the paragraphs were broken up a little more (especially the second paragraph), but nonetheless well executed and...I can't wait for the next chapter *Squee*
Yay! New chapter!
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Oh god I'm bricking it, don't hate it.
Nice new chapter here. Looking forward to more.
oh shit awkwardness levels are high with this ending of this chapter that is
780058 I think the phrase is "gather her senses", not "gather her circus".
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Its a metaphor for the act she has to put on, because there are clowns in circuses, and clowns put on an act? GOD DAMN I'M FUNNY! My proof reader said I should be careful of metaphors and that they only work in poems, shoulda listened.
780899 Your comment certainly was. And yes, metaphors, in prose, needs a bit more of a set up. That or a translator.
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I'll keep that in mind, make them just as long as they aren't terribly vague.
OOooo Fast updates. Nice this pleases me.
Oh I am positively jumping out of my seat dear sir or madam
PM me if you don't want to spoil in comments, but does this have a happy ending? i understand it can be sad, but i don't want to read if there is no happy ending. also include the name of the story if you can, in case it has been a while and im not sure who responded back anymore at that time. that is if you op to PM me and not in comments
Good Chapter, although it would be good if some of the paragraphs were broken up a little more (especially the second paragraph), but nonetheless well executed and...I can't wait for the next chapter *Squee*
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Ill take a look at that, I don't want to brake them up too much though or else there'll be stuff going on all over the place .