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good story
I think you ment expendable instead of expandable. As i dont think you ment all ponoes are easily blown up like balloons.
who has your mental training been going.
Do I really need to explain this one?
next few chapters please if u have the time to do so
i want a small spoiler before I read it.
Is this like those other storys where the Human get's an overload on problems when he is old enough, or is this balanced?
I would also like to know if the sex is overused, only sometimes or only in the language.
I would like the help because at the moment I have not much time and I already had some bad storys, no offence intented.
With bad storys I mean in a way those, which let the Human look like a Gary stue, give him chapter for chapter a new depressing thing, death friends, death family, nearly prison, nearly death because of chaos magic, one Marefriend and then he is going on a big adventure leaving everyone behind for long time, probaby crying a lot too....again.
I don't mind some dark stuf or something like that, but I'm mostly interessted in the adoption part of such a story, the thing that the Human adds a new race to Equestria and Slice of life if you want. (sorry if I rush my explanation a bit)
edit: I'm a fan of a good ending even if I like sad storys too, that means I hope the Human isn't one of those who is going back into his own world.
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Probably might have, my brain wasn't function so well yesterday. But I'll gladly fix that up today.
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Everything will be a balance set up. Solar easily take on challenges that face him, but he also will support other ponies to help him. He will have chapters that challenge him, but he will usually have the support of his family and friends behind him. Now for the language and sex, you might find a balance between the two. I have only written one clop section and there are just references to them doing it or just a sentence about it. Language hasn't gone crazy in this story, but I'm sure if it will. So everything is at a balance, sure I will put Solar in some tough situations, that will challenge him. But he won't turn out like all other humans in others stories like this. I hope this answers your question. Feel free to send me anymore, but I will not spoil anything that might come up in future chapters or future seasons, but will gladly answers questions.
7183409 I was more concerned about a story where maybe more than half of every chapter would be with sex. Since I saw one with Trixie and Rainbow in the morning, Trixie and Rainbow before lunch, Trixie and Rainbow actually do something else, and then the chapter ends with Trixie and Rainbow having sex again. So I just was concerned that it maybe could be overused.
Well you pretty much solved all the probems I had so far with what could happen in a story. I just got used to ask about some certain stuff, since I more then a few times ended up with some very bad examples of said storys.
I actually should start to read slower, but I will start at least some of the first for this story this week maybe tomorrow, I don't have to work the rest of the week, so I probably have time for the first chapters already.
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Well I'm glad I was able to answer your questions. Now just for the sex part, no chapter will be more than just a section for sex, if it isn't just mentioned for a brief sentence or two. I'm more interested in keeping the story on Solar as he moves through the mlp seasons and through the New Blood plot. Again, if you have any questions, never be afraid to ask them.
Sword Master i don't want the New Blood cult to hurt solar Ignition Flare family or kill his family
You know my buddy Alejin? Cool! I'm his new artist.
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Well nothing to worry about, the family is safe from death. But fights that get them wounded can be expected throughout. I have not planned to kill any of the family, I think it would be to hard to put that in. So I will be going fights that may put them in the hospital, but nothing on the lines of life or death.
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Nice, well I welcome you to my story. I do hope you enjoy it.
7184121 ok
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I do have one, but I haven't gotten around to doing his edits. But he is slowly working on getting the others edited, so I can put them back up as 'edited' versions. Though I have been proofreading the chapters I'm working on before I even put them up on the sight. So bare with the grammar in the early chapters, because in the summer, I will look over those and have my editor look over them also.
7183874 Thanks! I'm already enjoying it.
And now Solar and Shining are Detectives.Just like the cop shows I watched when I was a boy.Like Kojak,Barnaby Jones,The Streets of San Francisco,Harry-O,VEGA$ and Starsky & Hutch in the 70s.Hunter,T.J.Hooker,Spencer for Hire Mickey Spillanes Mike Hammer(Later renamed "The New Mike Hammer)and Miami Vice in the 80s.