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FIRST ONE TO COMMENT ON THIS CHAPTER!
Great job man.
Well done!
Hmmm its a good chapter definately well done but i feel this was a wasted opportunity to show case human tenacity. For example you could left his magic out of it and made it is own will to fight for his sanity instead of having his magic protect his mind. And you could have still used lunas spell give him the extra morale needed.
Its just other than his skin there's not much really showing his humanity. I mean you could replace his humanity with a griffon, harpie or anything else and still have the same affect with this kind of set up. I get he grew up as a pony but aside from eating meat theres nothing setting his species apart.
Again its a good story and chapter but we havent really seen anything that really drive home how different solar is.
7143609 I agree with that, and I have to admit that I skipped the fight, I wasn't in the mood for that and part of me felt like I didn't needed to really know that part completely.
I just expected one of them to maybe freak out, because she has a foal I mean. Does Rarity or the others even know that yet?
how you described the Fire Chains and Chain Spin Strike attacks reminded me of god of war. do you play it or just a coincidence?
ps: i like the story
i was listening to this during the nightmare moon fight and it fit pretty well.
7143609 kinda agree on that part with humanity and the kind of stories where human is raised by alicorns in a slice of life/action story (after my experience) has 4 ways they go about it. The human gets adopted and is weak as hell and a total pushover but do what they can or somehow becomes strong and then a villan later on.
There is they get adopted, feared like the plauge and earns trust and stuff happened (monster of canterlot in a nutshell)
And we have the common normal slice of life one where they actualy live a normal life and nothing realy happens alot.
then we have the op human with pony mind (AKA the chosen one) . It more or less gets rubbed in every opertunity that this person is insanly strong or ponetial to be god, and they are trown in everyone situation and bull happens during the fights or straight up turns into every generic anime Battle or dragon ball. ( I normaly call these kind
Of stories "cringe galore stories" p.s realy few adopted in that ganre)
On another note. You can count on a hand the number of stores i just flat out droped because i dont like them (dosent mean they are terrible just not my cup of tea) and this is one of them. Reason why is started good then went into the "cringe galore elements" (can work if its not dragged trough the entire thing.) Solar didnt show any human emotions other than the attack on twilight.
Fire Chains.Very "GHOST RIDER"LOL.;)Great work