7210338 Thx. I still think it could be a helluva lot better

7210808 working on the cover art right now!!! and its looking goooood!!

7211831 SWEEET!!

Did you read the conversation in chapter 4?

7317010 as far as the punctuation goes with pinkie, I purposely left commas out to give the effect that she was ramming all of her words into one big breath.

When you mentioned the whole cop thing, my grandfather was a cop, and one of my friends is a cop so I've had a little experience with their lingo. Plus I watch A LOT of “Cops” the TV show.

As far as everything else, I will make some adjustments and I might actually use you're words for that little bit about rainbow dash and what condition she was in.

I appreciate your feedback and if you're looking for a good cry, read chapter 4

Nice! U posted it!

Looking good! Keep on writing!

7319393 I'm still at a roadblock with ch. 6. I've got nothing!!

7332252 I told you!

7489371 I'm working on it but I've got a huge case of writers block right now. It sucks

:) I like this chapter

7889712 glad you enjoyed it

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I'm still hitting a roadblock with it. I kinda sorta have an idea of what I want to do. But I just don't know how to approach it. I'm working on it though ^^

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Thanks ^^

8530181
I only read the first chapter and already I'm hooked

8530181
AMAZING STORY! Please keep up the awesome work

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Haha. Im glad youre enjoying it so far