With a new life given to me by the Mother of Creation, I spend my time enjoying the little things. Reading a sappy romance novel to enjoying flying high in the air but after the return of Princess Luna. Things aren't as peaceful as they seem.
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Wouldn't mind seening a side clop story to this for situations like this. Interesting chap regardless. Also glad you didn't make rainbow out as a dumbass in this. Always felt she is smart but hids it behind her cocky jock persona.
8040881 ah, makes sense. Well, as much sense as magic can make...
So...in this universe Apple are pony version of KKK?
That was nice, I can imagine Rose Tbagging every single kill on every fps.
Hmm I wonder if Rose will remember to hold back on sleeping around if she gets to date RD. That mare has some serious issues and will need quite the emotional support of she's to become Loyalty.
Having some on her life would go a long way towards that, let's hope our heroine's memory doesn't fail her now.
Nice to see a smart Dash. Deep seated troubles, lack of flutters' support, still the question of why did she work so much instead of following her dream of flying? Not to mention the crazy diet. She's going to have to change a lot of her mind in order to make it through...
How will Rose walk that path with her?
Do answer us soon, dammit!!
Pretty please?
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Thanks normally ppls just say the come out whenever they feel like it. I'm glad you have something that is somewhat organize
*Doing nothing but sitting back, watching how the events with RD will unfold. A small voice in my head saying "Called It!" to the drama after RD found out about the thrown race*
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8047111 I just want to say that I love your picture.
8042302 I've been a little hesitant when writing erotica. I don't know when to focus solely on the description in between dialogue or how to pace the act. I've been practicing by roleplaying with people, but most tend to write like this:
my hand grabs your waist i pull you closer. - your very cute when squeak - I lean closer tracing my hand lower slowly with one hand and with the other hand i lift you leg then wrapped it around my waist. Giggled loudly.
(How I would have written that.)
My hand tentatively gripped your waist, pulling you closer to know the soothing warmth of your body. A low growl of delight escaped my lips, the sight of your sheepish wiggling in my grasp made the moment even sweeter. "You are cute when you squeak like that. It's like music to my ears." I leaned in, tracing my hand alone your eloquent curves shaped like a beautiful violin. With my other hand, I lifted your leg like a bow and curled it around my waist for support. "I want to hear even more music come from your lips."
Before, I used to write like Example number 1. Now I write like Example number 2.
Still a little shy about it though, but this time there will be a Clop side to this story.
8058800 honestly, you just have to let it flow naturally. If you'd like, i can link you a story that has a lot of clop chaps in it (pretty much a clop fic with underline story aspects as far as I see it) for you to get some ideas on how to write it yourself.
Zonya Who that and will it be revealed what Apple Jack did?
Also Apple jack still the element of honesty?
God your writing has gotten so much better. I can't wait to see how all of this turns out