With a new life given to me by the Mother of Creation, I spend my time enjoying the little things. Reading a sappy romance novel to enjoying flying high in the air but after the return of Princess Luna. Things aren't as peaceful as they seem.
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Fixed. Poor Cloud.
8006508 Rekt
Damn, i fucking love this fic
I'm going to be honest, I'm pleasantly surprised with this fic. The prequel, well.. I gave up on chapter 14, quite some months ago. The Mary Sue'ness Rose had on that one became too much. You've grown quite a bit as a writer, I've got to admit.
I did read the last two chapters before reading this fic, though, to have some context. "Discord did it" was actually a reason I can understand for that.
Now, on this one, damn. This Rainbow is a huge mess. Not only of insecurity by the bulling, being faced with being nowhere near as good as she believed, losing her only support... She will also have to deal with being a lesbian in a homophobic society. That mix is bound to be explosive. I hope Rose realises how much Loyalty depends on her not screwing up.
That is, IF she's Loyalty on this one. The Rainboom that most likely triggered the cutie marks was Rose's, after all. If it happened like that, it is. That's a big if.
Anyway, have a like, I'm anxiously following this one now. Oh, and her having trained since the crib to be a badass and having memories do make for a wire more believable reason for her capabilities. Now the question remains...
Does Rainbow have the potential to be the fastest mare alive, or will Rose take that from her, too? Because if there's a villain I can imagine is a Rainbow that finds out she was the one supposed to be a hero, only for another to take her place
I have no doubt that rose picked up on cloud either having feelings for rose or rainbow
8006788 Dank right you do
Boooo. Who gives a shit about Rainbow Dash. Crush her! Leave nothing left!
Exited to see more
I remember that from the first story! I wonder if Spitfire knows of anything from her past? Probably not, unless getting punished is something they do together in their free time