With a new life given to me by the Mother of Creation, I spend my time enjoying the little things. Reading a sappy romance novel to enjoying flying high in the air but after the return of Princess Luna. Things aren't as peaceful as they seem.
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Damn...
With what I know of *cough cough* Winter Rose *cough*, the main character, that former guard captain must've been a real d-bag to get the beating he must've for the effects AJ described to RD...
7996946 *Cough.* "She" *Cough*
I have a question I've been meaning to ask since the first character, will we be seeing summer and the rest of rose friends in this fic?
7997053 It will be, bittersweet
DAMM it applejack, you think rose is lying about stuff and you go spouting about causing trouble, boy do i hope they get a good dose of the truth (or is applejack still a liar at this moment in time due to events not happening yet?
7996982 Right, her "'Magic Mike' turned into a 'Pretty Princess';" kinda forgot to reiterate that particular point...
7997057 I'll take that as a maybe then, also great chapter can't wait for the next one.
7997057 looking good so far. I'm liking it and can't wait to see what you do next. Also I think you might be the first Female author I've come across. Could be wrong but none of the others I follow seriously give off the vibe you do with your writing.
7997480 *Facehoofs. "The Captain is a she." *Face implosion
7998924 Shhhhh. I don't think they got the Undertale one or the other one.
Whats the update schedule of this?, because holy shit i'm loving it, and I need moar
7999149 I don't have a schedule, but I try to get one or two done within a week. I'm actually thinking and doing actual drafts with this story. Sorta.
What a twisssssst
Will be interesting to see how this goes down
7998043 I'm... starting to wonder if we're talking about the same things... I implied that former Captain (gender unknown), the one Winter (previously human male, currently female pegasus) fucked up to get her Cutie Mark, because he did something fucked up to piss her off; last time she got her Cutie Mark, it was by massacring thirty-something slaving rapists in a Blood Rage. Is it not safe to assume a similar situation, or has Winter changed so much as to have savagely beaten an innocent pony for the sole purpose of receiving her Cutie Mark...?
8000112 It says in the last sentence that the Captain is a she, and how she got her cutie mark this time will be something completely different
8000217 ... Then why did AJ imply that Winter's Cutie Mark involved brutality?
I'm willing to admit that I don't pay attention to the genders of characters, unless the writer deems it important enough to almost directly point out; when it's done in a relatively subtle manner, I often find myself missing it, and mentally designating them as gender neutral, since I don't really deem such an aspect important enough to ones character all on it's own...
8000249 Cause the story behind her cutie mark is brutal, and I usually don't say names unless they are important. And I'm currently working on the story behind the cutie mark, and its almost done.
8000327 I suppose there's always that.
8000327 Well, there's always that, I suppose.
We all know applejack hates buisiness ponies
Also it is not your buisiness applejack!
Has nopony else noticed Fallout reference?
Wonder if Applejack's Head would explode if Rose told her the unvarnished truth.
Big difference to lying and not telling someone something you think they wouldn't be able to handle.
OH no is this RD a tsundere like Summer was?
I like what you did with the alternate universe, how just Rose's interactions have already change the future, and could possibly do a lot more damage down the road.
Also, this timeline is slightly confusing. The first story, didn't you say that Spitfire was around 18 when she was forced to watch Rose, and the mane 6 were already around and Twilight was already ascended, and yet, in this universe Twilight doesn't appear to be around and Luna has not returned yet, as the elements of harmony don't seem to be used yet; even though Spitfire adopted Rose at sixteen when Rose was one.
I guess I'll figure it out soon. I do enjoy the new writing style and the challenge with a change of scenery. I love trying to put storylines together, it makes it fun.