.....*sigh*, this story had some potential, but of course, it was ruined by the oh so famous " one of the main 6 does somethings horrible but is instantly forgiven ", I'm done.
Aww ....twilight should have at least been minorly punished for her misdeeds ..comedicaly speaking ... Then again ,, glad Drake isn't the "eye for an eye " type
1.Drake should put a curse on her to force her to have nightmares until she learns her lesson. 2.It's spelled here. Not hear. As in "hey mom I'm here" compared to "o.k. Hun I hear you"
Nope. It does not interested me. I don't hate it but I also don't like it. Here is something for my parting.
P.S. Saw you mentioned Fallout. Have you read 'Fallout Equestria: Project Horizon' yet? It is finally finished and the ending is rather bitter sweet. P.P.S. If not then have you read 'Fallout Equestria'?
Well his eyeball was the only thing that the bullet hit so his eyelid is still intact so when he is blinking he is blinking with both eyelids. So under his bandaged eye he blinks with his eyelid.
I have come to a verdict, this story deserves a 2/10.
This is absolutely trash, the characters don't act like they are supposed to, they are also not properly designed... I'm going to stop right there, there is just to many things wrong with story. At least you managed to understand that you should have waaaaaay more paragraphs than you had in your first chapters.
Anyways, this is trash, though, I will be finishing this just to have a bit more knowledge on what not to do when writing stories.
8745456 Lol. Not only did you not say what's wrong with it in your little comment, but only said "it's trash" seems to me your just a hater. I like this story. But if you detailed an actual fkn report then maybe I won't consider you an idiot. Have a good day.
.....*sigh*, this story had some potential, but of course, it was ruined by the oh so famous " one of the main 6 does somethings horrible but is instantly forgiven ", I'm done.
Aww ....twilight should have at least been minorly punished for her misdeeds ..comedicaly speaking ...
Then again ,, glad Drake isn't the "eye for an eye " type
No worries Twilight is gonna get whats coming to her next chapter. Things are gonna get scary bwahhahaahh!!! It's gonna be gooood.
6978330 yeah, i dont get why they always gets a free pass. its annoying, welp new story.
aswome looking forward to the next chapter
6978635 kick ass i hope you post the next chapter very soon
1.Drake should put a curse on her to force her to have nightmares until she learns her lesson.
2.It's spelled here. Not hear. As in "hey mom I'm here" compared to "o.k. Hun I hear you"
Thats the plan
Nope. It does not interested me. I don't hate it but I also don't like it.
Here is something for my parting.
P.S. Saw you mentioned Fallout. Have you read 'Fallout Equestria: Project Horizon' yet? It is finally finished and the ending is rather bitter sweet.
P.P.S. If not then have you read 'Fallout Equestria'?
I'm working on two different stories so bare with me hear k?
Wouldn't it be blinking not winking because he only has one eye?
7001404 also if his other eye is covered and closed doesn't it mean he is constantly winking
Well his eyeball was the only thing that the bullet hit so his eyelid is still intact so when he is blinking he is blinking with both eyelids. So under his bandaged eye he blinks with his eyelid.
>>Dude please update! It's Awesome as hell!
Fanboy these humans are too forgiving
I have come to a verdict, this story deserves a 2/10.
This is absolutely trash, the characters don't act like they are supposed to, they are also not properly designed... I'm going to stop right there, there is just to many things wrong with story. At least you managed to understand that you should have waaaaaay more paragraphs than you had in your first chapters.
Anyways, this is trash, though, I will be finishing this just to have a bit more knowledge on what not to do when writing stories.
8745456
Lol. Not only did you not say what's wrong with it in your little comment, but only said "it's trash" seems to me your just a hater. I like this story. But if you detailed an actual fkn report then maybe I won't consider you an idiot. Have a good day.