On one hand, with ponies suspension of disbelief is required. On the other, your self inserted author is rich, apparently legally. So, ponies have yet to show up where I stopped to type this out, and already you broke my suspension of disbelief. The only book that is that prolific is the Bible, and no one can claim any money for writing that.
I'm no judge, but it peeves me a tad bit that you spelt which like witch. I read it like, "pure light witch made him" a pure light 'witch'. Sorry. It looks good, but deserves some editing.
This is interesting and i am looking for more this. (sorry my bad english)
So the author becomes the main character of his own story ...
Marry sue.... Big time
The beginning really doesn't hook me into the story..................But, I'm willing to wait and see.
6908822 Its called a "Self-Insert"
On one hand, with ponies suspension of disbelief is required. On the other, your self inserted author is rich, apparently legally. So, ponies have yet to show up where I stopped to type this out, and already you broke my suspension of disbelief. The only book that is that prolific is the Bible, and no one can claim any money for writing that.
Bring me 115!!!!
I heard In a gun sync sounded like a heavy metal song related to call or duty poped in my head with my like.
You know how to spell 'fuck' but not 'damn'? Are you kidding me?
7123331 What about the Catholic church and their publishers. Those guys must be banking.
I for one would find a story about a 90 degree angle that somehow turned into only 89 degrees to be quite lovely.
Fifth sentence.
7000106 y tho
The names Draken, John Draken
I'm no judge, but it peeves me a tad bit that you spelt which like witch. I read it like, "pure light witch made him" a pure light 'witch'. Sorry. It looks good, but deserves some editing.