Dude this is one great book I'd like it if you can continue it the plot seems to go a little fast but if you slow it down a little it would n a little better but other than that it is great!!
8846683 I see what you mean. Yes, it looked like my comment was formed the same way a hater would form their's but it doesn't mean that this story is by anyway good. Look at it from a publishers perspective: I would actually expect the publisher to just laugh if something like this were to be submitted.
Besides wasting the time it would take to actually explain the flaws would take way to long and would require a re-read of this story.
You can like this story all you want but it doesn't mean it is good.
LOL
Drake X Raincloud
Quit it with the chivalrous knight act dude it is just stupid.
Dude this is one great book I'd like it if you can continue it the plot seems to go a little fast but if you slow it down a little it would n a little better but other than that it is great!!
8383679
I plan to scrap this story but I'm coming back with a newer and much more better one >3<
When does the next chapter come?
So no getting back at Twilight
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I'm totally not stalking you or anything...
8636433
The picture scared the shit out of me
I haven't read the story in a while but was wondering when will we see a new chapter or maybe a rewrite of the story
Any timeframe on an update to this? I'd like to read it but its not been updated in like two years? Just wondering
8846683
I see what you mean. Yes, it looked like my comment was formed the same way a hater would form their's but it doesn't mean that this story is by anyway good. Look at it from a publishers perspective: I would actually expect the publisher to just laugh if something like this were to be submitted.
Besides wasting the time it would take to actually explain the flaws would take way to long and would require a re-read of this story.
You can like this story all you want but it doesn't mean it is good.
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Bad news this story is Dead