Tech (my OC I entered into the contest) is best pony. (brick wall with the number 4 spray painted on it appears behind Tech. He bucks it until it has a hole in it) YOU F'IN KNOW IT! *shoves Tech back through fourth wall* FU YOU CAN'T BREAK THE FOURTH WALL UNTIL I WRITE MY FANFIC ABOUT YOU! Sorry about that.
If I had a dollar for every time I read a description like the one for this story, I could hire a comedian to make a funny joke about what I could buy with my piles of money.
7457651 Considering they are paid for at cost by donations and then placed in every church, and a couple chains of hotels... Yeah, they aren't making money on either the new or old testament.
7543116, 7579662 guys i understand both of your frustations but we have to wait because the author had been in a accident that put him out of commission for who know's how long
7597971 i know, what's worse is the fact that the accident left the author with memory loss, how i know this you might ask? The author's brother said so and also said that author's family nor the doctors know if the memory loss is temporary or permanent
Ok, I going to say it, nice story. Other than the grammar problems it was an excellent read. The only thing I have to say is slow it down. From just reading it, it goes. But that's not pushing me off from wanting to read more. I would just say slow it down in the future and craft a few longer chapters. But other than that, you have my attention.
That's cool man I'm happy to hear that I just wanted to put out my OC if that's alright with you his name is jackal he is a unicorn he is male he has dark blue coat and he has black Maine neon blue Highlight going down his hair red tips on his tail in Maine he is also a night guard he got his Cutie Mark at the age of 12 and since he got his Cutie Mark witches black tribal style Jackal Cutie Mark се since then he's worked in the castle as personal guard to Princess Luna but also quickly became friends with her
Now that is a straight-up cockblock.
damn you for trolling us
Tech (my OC I entered into the contest) is best pony. (brick wall with the number 4 spray painted on it appears behind Tech. He bucks it until it has a hole in it) YOU F'IN KNOW IT! *shoves Tech back through fourth wall* FU YOU CAN'T BREAK THE FOURTH WALL UNTIL I WRITE MY FANFIC ABOUT YOU! Sorry about that.
More chapters please !!!
7278716 no i have not i must read this
hell no thats long not reading it
*<>* drunk Rainbowdash is best lay
NNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
7284542 i can give you a full detail of him if you want
I hope it's my oc but I won't get my hopes up.
7278713
Sure you can help i need all the help i can get.
Oh fuck you cliff hangers are the worst hurry up with the next chapter or else you get no................ Uh..... Cake great story though update soon!
mother fucker
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suspension -_-
If I had a dollar for every time I read a description like the one for this story, I could hire a comedian to make a funny joke about what I could buy with my piles of money.
Due to my brother (theredbregade) being stuck in the hospital i (thebluemob) will be using his computer to work on the story.
I think the next song you should use is this
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Qar41xlfKng]
7434532 what happenned to him?
7445075
Really bad car crash...he's breathing through a tube
7445131 really?! damn not another 1 when did it happen?
7445147 month after summer vacation started
7445149 shit your bro is the second Author dat i know of that suffer this fate when he wake up he might have some amnesia
God i hope that does not happen your brother is to good of an author
7445161 heh..yea he is. He trusted me so much that he gave me his whole journal on this story
7445167 well is his condition getting better?
7445172
Yup!
7445188 good hope he gets well enough to write again
7457651 Considering they are paid for at cost by donations and then placed in every church, and a couple chains of hotels... Yeah, they aren't making money on either the new or old testament.
7434532 oh wow. I'm sorry to here that. I send my well wishes and hope he recovers quickly.
Still waiting....
Dud I am waiting
7543116, 7579662 guys i understand both of your frustations but we have to wait because the author had been in a accident that put him out of commission for who know's how long
7597831 I didnt know that but this a really good story with interesting characters, and plot.
7597971 i know, what's worse is the fact that the accident left the author with memory loss, how i know this you might ask? The author's brother said so and also said that author's family nor the doctors know if the memory loss is temporary or permanent
Shit! I hope he gets beter son.
IM BACK BABY WAHOOOOOOO!!!!!
7599328 oh thank god, how are you feeling?
7704628 WAYYY BETER and inspired!!
7710942 well can't wait to read more chapters of this story, just don't force yourself ok? take your time
7711879 Thank you for your concer
7712695 your welcome, and by the way welcome back to fim fiction
7712705 Its good to be back...
7713337 glad to have you back
Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Oh trust me...Drake has no intention on trusting twilight for a long time and plans on making her pay mwahaha
8017404 R.I.P 50 cal. You shall be missed.
Ok, I going to say it, nice story. Other than the grammar problems it was an excellent read. The only thing I have to say is slow it down. From just reading it, it goes. But that's not pushing me off from wanting to read more. I would just say slow it down in the future and craft a few longer chapters. But other than that, you have my attention.
Hey man I just wanted to know if you're still taking suggestions for OCs
8055146 sure i dont mind but im slowing it down when it comes to adding more
That's cool man I'm happy to hear that I just wanted to put out my OC if that's alright with you his name is jackal he is a unicorn he is male he has dark blue coat and he has black Maine neon blue Highlight going down his hair red tips on his tail in Maine he is also a night guard he got his Cutie Mark at the age of 12 and since he got his Cutie Mark witches black tribal style Jackal Cutie Mark се since then he's worked in the castle as personal guard to Princess Luna but also quickly became friends with her
Brah stop teasing me about kissing first kissing derpy than rainbow...respect.....