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Username: ender night
Name: Nights

Coat: very light grey

Gender: male

Cutiemark: sliver moon sith a purple dragon in it

Cutiemark meaning: , dragon rider

Hair design and color(s):Spikish and a blueish teal

Eye color: purple

Personality: loyal, friendly short temper, pertective of his friend, but not over protective

Backstory: one of the only three who are his kind, annierians.

Spesius: earth pony

Age: 16

Other: link to what nights. Looks like here
http://silvershadowmirror.deviantart.com/art/Commission-2-593353769?ga_submit_new=10%253A1457293068&ga_type=edit&ga_changes=1

7110105 Insert in the comments or mail it to me

Is this really a self-insert? What makes this story different from the other human in Equestria stories? You respond to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment that you want to respond to and then clicking on the >> that appears, in case you didn't know.

Name: Nick Silvermane

Age: 22

Body color: Grayish silver.

Mane: Silver with black tints in it. His tail is black with silver tints in it.

Eye color: One Red eye and One Blue eye. Around his blue eye there are claw marks from a Diamond Dog.

Cutie Mark: A sheriffs badge but instead of it saying sheriff on it it says Defender.

Species: A male Unicorn.

Job: One of Luna's Personal Night Guard.

Weapon of choice Swords: Can use most types of swords but he prefers dual wielding Katana's.

Magic: Can use Lightning magic plus he uses his magic to hold two Katana's at once whenever he fights his enemies. He can charge his Katana's with Lightning and in a pinch make Lightning armor over top of his normal armor. (Think of it as a the Overshield from Halo.) Can also heal small cuts and bruises.

Personality: He is a funny dude most times. He loves hearing terrible puns and making some as well. But if you hurt his friends or any innocent mares or fillies then you will be in a world of pain. Gets along with mostly everyone and is friends with mostly every species. He has great manners just forgets to use them sometimes He also has a little crush on a certain hyperactive Pink mare.

Bio

Was born in Appleloosa. Since he was a youngling he wanted to help folks out. At the age of 10 he got his cutiemark when some bullies in the town were picking on Little Strongheart. He rushed the bullies and used some lightning magic that he was working on to scare the bullies away. Little Strongheart thanked him for saving her then he got his cutiemark. It was a sheriff badge with the word Defender on it. At the age of 16 he trained himself in the art of Swordsmanship . When he turned 18 a gang of 4 Diamond Dogs rolled into town and started to terrorize the towns folks. The locals not use to seeing danger like this did nothing as the gang demanded everyone's bits and jewelry. Seeing as no one was going to do anything he grabbed a sword from the blacksmiths and started to fight the gang. He was outnumbered both by their strength and numbers but with a little luck and his lightning magic he defeated 3 of the Diamond Dogs. As he got to the last one the leader of the Diamond Dog gang threw sand in his eyes and clawed at one of his eye sockets. Nick in the end defeated the gang but damaging his right eye. He could still see out of it but has trouble seeing anything from a distance. After that he was made sheriff. Nick stayed in Appleloosa for 4 more years until he decided to join the Night Guard. He appointed Sheriff Silverstar to be the new Sheriff in his stead. Nick moved to Canterlot where Nick got into the Night Guard and he's been defending Princess Luna since then.

7110842 um when is de chapter is gonna be?

Couple days maybe a week

This took at least an hour of my time...also feel free to resolve any problems stated within this comment...if you choose my OC...
NAME:Molten flail
Type:unicorn
Cutie mark:an on fire half open book with a steel yo-yo on the front.
Age:20
Mane\tail colors: constantly shifting colors on the hotter side of the color wheel.
Body color: light shade of brown [ebony?]
Eye color: shifting colors as if a warm fire.
Body condition: skinny but fit
Personality:warm to others especially when they show kindness back, protective, stubborn, very low boiling point(gets pissed easily especially when talking about his old family) but quick to forgive, will fuck up anyone who fucks with his friends or (current) family.
Short bio:master of flails, loves sharp yo-yo and scyths on chains, able to enchant especially if fire is included, loved his parents but they died on him.
BIO:this stallion however protective or stubborn he is is a master in several types and styles of flail weapons excelling far past the normal aptitude for a master of these skills.
His favorites among the flail types he owns his two favorites are his first weapon obtained, a heavy duty yo-yo with razor sharp blades embedded into the sides and two semi-scyths attached to two chains both able to rip normal armor to shreds,both able to do significant fire/magma damage, the molten part of his name comes from his natural ability to enchant items especially if they include fire type elements. Loved his parents but they died of old age when he wasn't there to see them pass he constantly beats himself up about it.
I will post more if asked.

Took me 2 hours to make this, Jesus my hands hurt.
NAME:Midnight Specter
Type: Earth pony Stallion
Cutie mark: A black murasama placed over it's sheath with a circle of black flames around it.
Age: 28
Mane\tail colors: Mane and tail are black while having a dark blue streak
Body color: grey
Eye color: Pupil is slitted. One is Blue while other is grey from injury.
Body condition: Extremely well fit from army experience

Personality: Has almost no emotions due to a tragic past, loves, cares and will go to hell and back for his friends and loved ones. However when he's in public he will put on a 'mask' to hide his emotions and appear happy.

BIO: when Specter was just 13 when his mother and father who were a well known and kind couple of a thestral mare and Earth pony Stallion were murdered when a Griffon squadron attacked his home and slaughtered everyone in it. With no home and no family or friends, he signed up for the guard and began climbing the ranks quickly because of his strategic thinking, skills with the sword his father gave him (before he died), and ability to assassinate or gather information without even letting the enemy know he was there. After getting high enough he decided to re-introduce an old form of fighting from the old guard hundreds of years ago called CQC,(Also he can fight on his hindlegs),which he mastered. While fighting Commander Steelbeak,a vile soul who tourted captured stallions, prisoners of war and had his way with any females he captured, stray arrow from a griffon archer hit him in the eye, luckily the eye wasn't fully lost but Specter was unable to see through it again. But his eye wasn't the only thing he lost. During the battle there were 500 casualties out of the 1,500 pony soldiers while the griffons lost 900 soldiers out of the 1,250 total. Among those pony casualties were his best friends, Shadow Shot, Astral Blade, and Onyx. When fighting the Griffon General who started the war, General Bloodbeak, who overthrew the old and kind emperor to gain more power and spread his ideals that griffons should rule ponies. During the final battle between Bloodbeak and Specter, Bloodbeak drank a potion that made him stronger, faster and more agile, which pushed Midnight Specter to the brink defeat. However, despite almost being defeated, Specter remembered all the pain that Bloodbeak had caused and suddenly felt a piece of him unlock inside. Getting a massive surge of power, Specter's iris turned red while his mane, fur, and tail turned black with while his armor turned into solid shadows. After the war Specter returned to Canterlot as a hero, but he didn't want the reward to go to him but instead to all the guards who sacrificed themselves in the war. The next day he disappeared with note saying "I'm no hero, never was, never will be."
Weaknesses; Light magic, fire magic, Astral spells and Poison Spells.
*Think of Him as a not as overpowered version of Vergil From DMC.

can these be images rather than descriptions

7125928 yup

Ah ok

7126020 when is the next chapter?

well....my oc is definitely NOT a pony...so im out

Here I got a picture of my oc http://pre01.deviantart.net/9199/th/pre/f/2015/230/5/5/twilight_sparkle_vs_the_evil_herself_by_mrnoxier96-d966290.png Yes she's the one on the right. She may look like twilight sparkle but she's the evil clone of twilight sparkle, making her a demon counterpart. She's about 6,000 years old but don't let the age fool you, she acts like she's about 23 years old. She may be evil but that's cause her friends died along with brother and her parents, the cost of immortality. She's can even be a succubus http://pre03.deviantart.net/ce43/th/pre/f/2013/100/9/f/succubus___01_by_aditya777-d2lcct6.jpg She's one mean alicorn if you get her in the mood to cook though so becarful if you see her around cooking wear or anything that's like pots or pans, because she'll whip up the meanest chocolate pancakes in the world. By that I mean she uses cinnamon, chocolate, and lots of other things. So I hope you like my oc.

7126020 DOV FEYN rough translation Dragon Bane he is a dragon born with what ever shouts, i usually have him in other storys with at least most of them but to make him not op as hell he uses FUS RO DAH (unrelenting force) JOOR ZAH FRUL (dragonrend) SLEN TIID VO(resurrect dragon) but it leaves him greatly weakened near comatose for a week he would never use it but say ic spike dies andnhe cares deeply for him like a brother he would use it and finally WULD NAH KEST (whirlwind sprint) now appearance he is a ash grey Pegasus with a black mane with a blood red streak the tips of his wings are blood red he has a scar on his face going from his left eye over his snout to his right cheek bone he also has red eyes that when you look into them you see anger, death, sorrow, and misery, but you also see a caring soul that would do anything to protect and care for the ones he hold dear but he is not one to take being attacked lightly and will fight back his back ground is that he was born in cloudsdale but moved to the border of equestria with his parents to a town of your choice five years later his parents were killed by bandits while he hid in the basement he then swore vengeance when he was 15 he was found in a canyon by a elder dragon that sensed he was destined for great things as the dragonborn and took him in and tought him the way of the voice for the years to come and now he is 29 and found his way to (place of authors choice)

7193546 earlier in the comments he said nothing op like a alicorn my oc is a dragon born but i scaled him down alot like 90%

Name: Low Light

Species / tribe: Unicorn Stallion

Magic Color: Black

Coat Color: Grey

Mane Color: Black with a blue highlight on the middle-left side

Cutie-mark: Black circle with black strips coming out from the circle ; outlined in a semi-thin white line

Abilities: Knows a spell that makes him blend in with shadows ; Has night-vision

Bio: Low Light was born a noble, but never liked being one. So, despite his parents constant urges to stay in Canterlot, he moved to Ponyville at the age of 18 and now runs a fairly succesful potions shop.

Idea for the story: Drake needs a potion for the prank he's going to pull on Twilight, so he goes to Low Light's potion shop to obtain that potion.

Can oc be kirin which is a dragon pony hybrid?

How long until you make a new freaking chapter?

(My first ever comment )
Name:Technology Electro Zap (shortened to Tech)
Age:inumerable
Pony age:30
Species:half unicorn half changeling
Gender:male
Special features: glowing completely white eyes and mechanical wings
Parents: twilight and a changeling disguised as flash sentry (oh no everyone hates me now)
Appearance:yellow Coat and dark blue mane styled like soarin's.(just look at my account picture) When he wants to look evil he dyes his coat red with blood and red spectra(yes, like from rainbow factory) (oh yeah, he's evil whenever he feels like it)
Cutie mark: circuit board
Special talent: making technology
Personality: Immature and doesn't give a fk about anything. Also, a little stir crazy from traveling the multiverse
Bio: used to be one of nine all powerful rulers on earth but got banished to Equus by his older brother.
His brother gave him amnesia about his time on earth and made him be reborn as Twilight's and a changling disguised as Flash Sentry's son. When he was 7 he tried doing magic but overloaded with power. He tried to force the magic out through any holes in his head, but it wouldn't come out and got stuck in his eyes.(thus the glowing eyes) The magic burned away his eyes, and left condensed balls of glowing magic in place of his eyes. he used the magic from his new "eyes" to cast a permanent 360 degree vision spell. He started studying so he could be like his mother and got his cutie mark when he tried making a basic motor. He used his new knowledge to give himself mechanical wing. soon he figured out that a changling was posing as his dad and learned that besides the fangs and bug wings he looked just like himself in changeling form.
He has difficulty changing from changeling to pony form and vise versa.
Suggestion: he should appear either in the void or just randomly appear and watch a fight (he implanted himself with a shard of the dimension mirror so now he can travel through dimensions) and then say "well that just happened. To the next adventure!!!" Then disappear.

7113433 plz update this plz is is so good

when will the next chapter be out?

So sorry everypony my computer is officially dead so expect a long break.

7237433 ok hope you like our oc suggestions

7238179 trust me i do and im writing rough drafts on paper so when my computer is fixed ill have about 4 chapters ready to write.

7238320 cool i tried to make mine not op and have his strongest ability have a penalty

Well that marks my OC out for being an alicorn T_T Sometimes I feel there is so much hate on alicorn OCs for some reason anyways.... Can't wait for next chapter really enjoying this story wish I started later when there were more chapters....anyways really hope to see more chapters very soon! Anyways hope to see more very very soon. Keep up the awesome work!

I know I said somethings a little to much anyways..... you think I could give you a shortened version of my OCs bio profile pic just cause even tho I know he will not be accepted for being an alicorn?

Name: Light Speed

Age: 19

Gender:Male

Race: Unicorn

Cutie Mark:vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/xenoblade/images/e/ee/Monado_Speed.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150504213710

Coat colour: bright yellow

Mane colour: Deep blue

Mane style: Messy and all over the place

Eye colour: brown

Cutie mark meaning: Can increase the speed he can travel at and can slow down everything within his a short distance by stealing the speed. He can move fast enough to appear to be in two places at the same time and when he is in his rage mode he can move fast enough that time has to catch up with him. When he takes the speed from the surrounding area it appears to them he is moving at super speed and the same effect is achieved when he speeds himself up.

Personality: Is Cocky in a fight and isn't above using his magic to cheat but when someone brings civilians into the fight he gets serious and enters a rage mode and will suck all the speed out of the surrounding area and absorb it making him move faster than time itself. He is very flirty and will flirt with any intelligent life form. He is fun loving but under his happy exterior he holds a rage against those who threaten the lives of the innocent. He loves to sing songs while he is not fighting (Aviators songs) his favourite is This Means War by Aviators.

Backstory: As a Colt he was bullied constantly until he froze his main bully for three days gaining his Cutie Mark as he grew up his powers grew he got so good he could stop a lightning bolt midair. As time went on he grew care free until one day he got a letter from the guard telling him that his father was murdered. After his father's murder he trained in multiple martial arts and sworn to protect the innocent (his mother died during child birth).

Weaknesses: Using time travel spells, ice and boring lectures(can cause him to fall asleep)

Name: Bluejay

Coat indigo fading to gray around the muzzle and hoofs

Mane: cobalt/artic mix styled in a Mohawk.

long tail styled to look like blue fire

gender: male

eye color: silver silted (not blind)

age: 24

race Pegasus/demon (tartarus) mix
has two horns from demon heritage
wares 8 silver bracelets with onyx gems to signify demon heritage also blocks what little demon magic he has and can only be removed by the princesses (his Pegasus magic is normal)

cutie mark: none

Personality: carefull, slow trusting, proud and stubborn, trys to keep out of trubel

BackStory
Bluejay named by his mother was born to one of the natural demons of Tartarus that had escaped long ago be for he was born his father was found and sent back to his realm at the age of five his horns and demon magic had started to grow his mother fearing it would corrupt him went to Celestia where she had his bracelets/ringlets made to seal his demon magic to this day. he and his mother from then on lived on the outskirts of a small town were the age of 18 his mother grew ill and died on his 20th birthday he was forced to leave to town as they feard his fathers heritage he has been traveling for 4 years now. as he could only get odd jobs here and there only enufe to fead himself he couldn't settle down but soon the seal enchantments will brake and his demon magic will be free.

(why am i entering a half demon oc into a contest for a story about an angel? oh well hope this is good nuf)

7238320 aw man suks 2 hear that, not trying 2 rush u or pressure u or anything but out of curiousity how much longer do we have 2 wait until u get a new computer?

7268214
No worrys belive it or not im starting to type chapters today...they may be finished around sunday or earlyer

7269185 cool just don't rush it we waited this long, what's a couple of days r 2 us now? Take as much time as u need

7237433 forgot to put my PC's cutie mark it is a deadric shield with a dragon engraved on it with golden energy swirling into its mouth also I'm 99% sure that mine isn't picked but I hope It was but I was wondering whose was picked if you could tell me

7269185 also cool we can wait hope to see gore

You really, REALLY need to get a proof-reader of some sorts.
I'd be glad to work for a fee(aka nothing since I wanna help out).
(I mean come on man, you couldn't spell brigade right?)

7264879 have you ever read The Demon King? That sounds a lot like one of the characters lol

7115130 Not gonna lie your OC sounds badass!

fez man the man with a fez