i personally feel that this does not deserve to be a one shot, but a short series...its quite the concept and i would like to see just what the Mane 6 all have in store for Starlight...barring that, i would ask permission to write the rest of the tale myself...
Thanks! It's likely that will happen. This was just the result of a patron writing prompt. i saw the bit of potential for more when I finished it, thus why I left it open ended like I did.
You have successfully melted my brain with this. I will follow this for later.
Okay, actual comment time.
This was actually well done. I didn't expect anypony to be in character, this was just seen as a fun little romp. You did Starlight well though! And naughty Twilight is a dominant? Hmm... somehow I saw this coming. And to be honest, yes. Parts of TS in this one were in character. I mean guys, take a closer look at it.
i personally feel that this does not deserve to be a one shot, but a short series...its quite the concept and i would like to see just what the Mane 6 all have in store for Starlight...barring that, i would ask permission to write the rest of the tale myself...
Finally! A clopfic of Starlight Glimmer not involving rape or some other grimdark stuff! Thank you!
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I kind of left it open ended for that reason actually. So I likely will finish it as time permits. Thanks though. :)
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No, thank you! It's greatly appreciated. I did have fun with this, having not written this kind of content in a while.
Please do the rest of them. I really want to see something like this with all of the Mane 6 and Starlight Glimmer.
Please tell me there will be a sequel.
Bwhahha i love what you did with this idea
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Thanks! It's likely that will happen. This was just the result of a patron writing prompt. i saw the bit of potential for more when I finished it, thus why I left it open ended like I did.
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I'm sure at some point there will be additional chapters.
What about Pinkie Pie?
You know, I've been wondering "when will there be a clopfic of Starlight Glimmer getting spanked?"
It was worth the wait.
Ropes burn. I sense bondage coming up!
I saw a lot of double spacing here. You should fix that.
6855210 One of my favorite subjects actually.
You have successfully melted my brain with this. I will follow this for later.
Okay, actual comment time.
This was actually well done. I didn't expect anypony to be in character, this was just seen as a fun little romp. You did Starlight well though! And naughty Twilight is a dominant? Hmm... somehow I saw this coming. And to be honest, yes. Parts of TS in this one were in character. I mean guys, take a closer look at it.
Anyways! Onwards.