I'll take a look. Probably the import from Google docs.
Edit: I think you're referring to the space between paragraphs? Not sure. I think this is likely a stupid side effect of the Google doc importer, because it looks fine on there. I type everything in OpenOffice generally first, so...
At some point when I'm not so incredibly busy I'll clean it up, but not right now. :)
I mean, I see your point. The fact that this chapter suggests that Spike is aware of Twilight's ongoings means that he is mature enough to understand what it means, etc.
So yeah, while I would normally shy away from what would be considered foal-con, I am outright stating that Spike is old enough to be capable. The major reason behind Rarity's apprehension at first is because she has never strictly viewed Spike in that light before, she's always looked at him as a brother.
So yes, I've thought this through some, and I am considering the bonus chapter in this light.
a fun little suggestion...Bring Sunset Shimmer into the picture in a epilouge where Twilight sends Starlight to the human world to be 'disciplined' or to have a 'lesson' with her other 'student' since Starlight and Sunset do in fact share that similarity. Just an idea...loving the story
6960885 I figured you'd like the idea xD it just makes so much sense if you ask me...I mean they both used to be enemies of Twilight and now both look at her as if she is a goddess and in the fandom EVERYONE ships Sunset and Twilight and are slowly starting to ship Starlight and Twilight which i am perfectly okay with cause I personally like Starlight quite a bit
You should do a bonus for Spike and Rarity.
6935199
no
6936543
Was actually considering it.
6936899
I'll take a look. Probably the import from Google docs.
Edit: I think you're referring to the space between paragraphs? Not sure. I think this is likely a stupid side effect of the Google doc importer, because it looks fine on there. I type everything in OpenOffice generally first, so...
At some point when I'm not so incredibly busy I'll clean it up, but not right now. :)
6936597
i dont like spike/Rarity he is a child and rarity is an adult i dont think she is into that
6944151
I mean, I see your point. The fact that this chapter suggests that Spike is aware of Twilight's ongoings means that he is mature enough to understand what it means, etc.
So yeah, while I would normally shy away from what would be considered foal-con, I am outright stating that Spike is old enough to be capable. The major reason behind Rarity's apprehension at first is because she has never strictly viewed Spike in that light before, she's always looked at him as a brother.
So yes, I've thought this through some, and I am considering the bonus chapter in this light.
Lol starlight told rarity. next chapter please.
6952096
Being worked on. These things take time!
6952476 ok thanks.
Twilight is setting a book on fire?!
*grabs Twilight*
"You are uncovered, Changeling! What had you done to the real Twilight?!"
Makes somehow sense.
Meanwhile in Rartiy's closet:
: "I hate you, Starlight. (And how do you know how my dick looks like?)"
Good story!
I'm curious who will be next.
Possible candidates:
-Fluttershy
-Rainbow Dash
-Pinkie Pie
-
Spike(?)a fun little suggestion...Bring Sunset Shimmer into the picture in a epilouge where Twilight sends Starlight to the human world to be 'disciplined' or to have a 'lesson' with her other 'student' since Starlight and Sunset do in fact share that similarity. Just an idea...loving the story
6960866
...hahahaha
That's brilliant.
6960885 I figured you'd like the idea xD it just makes so much sense if you ask me...I mean they both used to be enemies of Twilight and now both look at her as if she is a goddess and in the fandom EVERYONE ships Sunset and Twilight and are slowly starting to ship Starlight and Twilight which i am perfectly okay with cause I personally like Starlight quite a bit
Nice and well written. More please?
7008406
There will be more, yes. I'm working on it. :)