Rowe Ruby... scythe

I see what you did there

Ember's resistance was impressive and I'm looking forawrd to Midnight's experiments with her classmates.

All hail Pinkamena Diane Pie, conqueror of tsunderes!

I ate a hasbrown with a drop of Satan's Blood on it, once. I puked.

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I see what you did there

Couldn’t resist.

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Ember's resistance was impressive and I'm looking forawrd to Midnight's experiments with her classmates.

Thanks! You’ll see them soon enough. And I don’t think it would have been fair to Ember’s character to just have her give in right off the bat. The show demonstrated she had a strong sense of pride in her station and dragon lineage, after all.

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All hail Pinkamena Diane Pie, conqueror of tsunderes!

Whose favorite tools of conquest are her blades, boobs, and super-spicy foods!

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If possible, could you somehow include Fluffle Puff in your fic please?

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I ate a hasbrown with a drop of Satan's Blood on it, once. I puked.

With apologies, I thought this was a troll post at first glance. It took me a minute to realize you meant the hot sauce! Yeah, I can well imagine.

I took a hot wing challenge once after being goaded into it by coworkers, who gleefully recorded it on their smartphones. Needless to say, I managed just one bite, and was in agony for an hour after. Then again the next day when it came out the other end.

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That's the one good thing about not being able to stomach it, I only went through it once. I still handled it better than the wimp who said the hot sauce's owner tricked into taking the challenge and got it confiscated. We still give him shit for that.

“My problem is that she’s not the right race or gender, and it’s not even the right year! She can’t even breathe fire and I doubt she’s ever held a blade in her life!”

She’s not one of us and has nothing to offer us! She can’t breathe fire and has probably never swung a blade in her life!

I can appreciate Ember wanting to hammer in her point, but maybe not this redundantly.

There was another surge of steam and volcanic vapors that hid her, and then nearly a dozen swords, knives, and even a scythe rained down to stab into the ground around her.

I am the pan of my cake...

Go on, try them out!” Pinkie invited eagerly, her hair returning to its usual floofy state. “I made them all myself!”
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“Once a decade?” Pinkie called back in horror despite her flat-haired state

Either Pinkie's really oscillating, or there's a flub here.

the other females were starting to move a bit more drunkenly as well while they continued to play with Pinkie’s weapons—and increasingly, with each other.

Normally i'd be concerned about combining intoxication and blades, but, you know, dragons. I think they'll be okay.

I didn’t know what to call your flavor, but I like it, Red Hot

I put that st on everything?

And Ruby? That scythe is yours if you want it!

But is it also a sniper rifle?

Okay, I can live with magically transmuted lizard boobs. Goodness knows that's not the strangest transformation they'll see today.

Capsaicin normally has little to no effect on reptiles, but as you demonstrated, Ember was already beginning to adopt some mammalian attributes. A most cunning conquest on Pinkie's part. Looking forward to what- and whoever's next.

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That's the one good thing about not being able to stomach it, I only went through it once. I still handled it better than the wimp who said the hot sauce's owner tricked into taking the challenge and got it confiscated. We still give him shit for that.

As well you should. That's a dick move on his part.

No such chance with my hot wing challenge. They made my sign a release form and wear disposable gloves to eat it. So the consequences were all mine to enjoy. They had a Hall of Fame for those who had passed the challenge with their pictures on the wall. The champion was somebody who had somehow downed four of those wings. I can't even fathom how numb due to previous spice exposure your mouth and stomach would have to be to eat all that.

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If possible, could you somehow include Fluffle Puff in your fic please?

I'm going to have to pass on that, sorry. I'm afraid I don't feel any affinity for that character, and I just can't see sexualizing her.

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He's either from Mexico or India...or his parents were from one each.

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“My problem is that she’s not the right race or gender, and it’s not even the right year! She can’t even breathe fire and I doubt she’s ever held a blade in her life!”

She’s not one of us and has nothing to offer us! She can’t breathe fire and has probably never swung a blade in her life!

I can appreciate Ember wanting to hammer in her point, but maybe not this redundantly.

I did four personal editing passes on the chapter using fimfiction's voice narration and there were three prereader passes as well, and yet it still slipped through. I Just don't understand how I can miss something so blatant, repeatedly.

There was another surge of steam and volcanic vapors that hid her, and then nearly a dozen swords, knives, and even a scythe rained down to stab into the ground around her.

I am the pan of my cake...

I don't get the reference, sorry.

Go on, try them out!” Pinkie invited eagerly, her hair returning to its usual floofy state. “I made them all myself!”
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“Once a decade?” Pinkie called back in horror despite her flat-haired state

Either Pinkie's really oscillating, or there's a flub here.

Flub. Fixed. I gave the entire chapter another very thorough editing pass this afternoon via listening to it recited on my smartphone, and ending up finding--and fixing--a slew of additional issues. At the very least, the chapter seems to flow much smoother now. I just don't understand why the first three passes didn't catch a lot of this and it took a fourth to find them.

the other females were starting to move a bit more drunkenly as well while they continued to play with Pinkie’s weapons—and increasingly, with each other.

Normally i'd be concerned about combining intoxication and blades, but, you know, dragons. I think they'll be okay.

They have very tough hides. It takes a lot to hurt them. I just liked the idea that their internal heat can affect them mentally if it grows too much.

I didn’t know what to call your flavor, but I like it, Red Hot

I put that st on everything?

Well, you might! Her flavor is cinnamon, and by the end, it'll be cinnamon liqueur. Ember's will be Peppermint, so her breath is hot, but her juices are cool.

And Ruby? That scythe is yours if you want it!

But is it also a sniper rifle?

It's also a gun! Actually, I may try to slip that quote in later!

Okay, I can live with magically transmuted lizard boobs. Goodness knows that's not the strangest transformation they'll see today.

Good. Because I did remember that you thanked me earlier for not giving them boobs to start, given they weren't mammals. I hoped this method of obtaining them was loophole enough for you.

Capsaicin normally has little to no effect on reptiles, but as you demonstrated, Ember was already beginning to adopt some mammalian attributes. A most cunning conquest on Pinkie's part. Looking forward to what- and whoever's next.

It doesn't? I had no idea. But even so, I'd think a million Scoville units would have some effect on them. That's a lot of a very caustic chemical.

In any event, glad you enjoyed! There will be a brief wrap up on the dragon side of things for both Rarity and Pinkie, and then we'll shift back to the grounds of CHS. Next up will be... Upper Crust with yet another new fetish.

Nice, nice. Lot's of Dragoness characters, very nice. Wish, they could be described a little more, though. Like height, horn shape, fitness and plumpness, to add some personality to them. But it must be really hard to juggle about 7 characters at the same time.

Also, shame there was no Smoulder. Just for funsies. She would never Ember forget this moment.

Would she, say, have gained the ability to breathe fire? Or just be as invulnerable to it as the dragons, even without Midnight’s magic? Have to say, It would have made for a fascinating arcane or scientific study, depending on which side of the portal you were on. One I’m sure even Midnight would have been curious to know the answer to.

That's a very good point. If the females gains some mammal traits, Pinkie and Rarity would gain some too, especially since they're enjoying the company. And ho-boy Spike would get a heart attack if she saw RariDragon.

“Well, I could use you three, but in truth, I think I need some new study subjects soon…”

Some CP girls would be great. They don't get enough love (like Ginger or Alazarin or others, really). Looking forward to this.

“She means that she wants to be won, first,” Obsidian Ire explained, for the first time taking on a tone of concern. “You have to understand that she’s really big on tradition,

Always thought that Ember is more of rebel amongs dragons or less about tradition and more for common sense. Plus, I really doubt she would be bribed or beaten in the traditional way. You sure you aren't just shy, Ember. Or maybe waiting for someone special?

Also guess Dragonesses are more empathetic than males. Makes me think Ire would have MILF-like curves.

dragons normally never drank water because it temporarily quenched their internal fire, leaving them unable to breathe it!

I'm nitpicking, but every living creature needs water. Unless it's magic...

“Sorry, sister, but if you want it to stop, then water won’t help! Only this will!” Pinkie then produced a full jug of whole milk;

“Be assured that even a million Scoville units are no match for my magic!

Feel like a slightly wasted opportunity. Like, Midnight saying the burning can only be stopped by drinking (magically-enchanted) milk and then makes Pinkie's breasts lactate.

Anyway, great chapter. Oh Ember, you lost the moment Pinkie entered your lands.

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Late at night and can't sleep. So I may as well answer this!

Nice, nice. Lot's of Dragoness characters, very nice. Wish, they could be described a little more, though. Like height, horn shape, fitness and plumpness, to add some personality to them. But it must be really hard to juggle about 7 characters at the same time.

It really is, but dammit, you're right. For as much as I enjoyed them, they deserve a little more description. I'll think about it and see what I can do.

Also, shame there was no Smoulder. Just for funsies. She would never Ember forget this moment.

Heh! Well, if I include her, it would be shades of underage. Of course, for dragons, that's a relative thing given she's (by my canon) well into her thirties! And it's not like that stopped me over in Nightmare Night... Now you're getting me thinking. And you know how dangerous that is!

Would she, say, have gained the ability to breathe fire? Or just be as invulnerable to it as the dragons, even without Midnight’s magic? Have to say, It would have made for a fascinating arcane or scientific study, depending on which side of the portal you were on. One I’m sure even Midnight would have been curious to know the answer to.

That's a very good point. If the females gains some mammal traits, Pinkie and Rarity would gain some too, especially since they're enjoying the company. And ho-boy Spike would get a heart attack if she saw RariDragon.

Spike would have a heart attack by seeing Rarity with the dragons! I've got a couple thoughts and ideas on the subject here, which I'll spoil since I'm not sure which I might include later. They include everything from them having a molt that gives them wings, to their futa forms involving dual dragonhoods, to of course having an invulnerability to fire or even be able to breathe it. And the extreme, they could even gain a full (anthro) dragon form, but if I did that for them, then I'd need to do it for the rest of the humane 6 (and the rest of CHS/CP) too, giving them alternate forms and abilities depending on who they were with. Ah, the possibilities are endless...

“Well, I could use you three, but in truth, I think I need some new study subjects soon…”

Some CP girls would be great. They don't get enough love (like Ginger or Alazarin or others, really). Looking forward to this.

Well, those two aren't present unless it's in the audience; Midnight's been limiting her vengeance to those who were on the competition team with her. I'll think about including them later, at least in passing. I'll at least say that up next is Upper Crust, and I have something very special planned for her!

Always thought that Ember is more of rebel amongs dragons or less about tradition and more for common sense.

She was later, but at this point, she's the dutiful daughter of the Dragon Lord. Hey, maybe this is what made her more rebellious and willing to try new stuff!

Plus, I really doubt she would be bribed or beaten in the traditional way.

In fairness, she *wasn't* bribed or beaten in the traditional way! Pinkie completely outflanked and outsmarted her here.

You sure you aren't just shy, Ember. Or maybe waiting for someone special?

That's what the other females were asking her! And they weren't wrong... as for someone special, she hasn't met Spike yet! And just think of what kind of stud Spike will be once Nightmare Night is over--he alone won't have his form reverted.

Also guess Dragonesses are more empathetic than males. Makes me think Ire would have MILF-like curves.

Works for me! As the oldest and largest--she's certainly seen a few ruts and laid a few eggs by then--I was thinking she'd be the most goddess-like of the group.

dragons normally never drank water because it temporarily quenched their internal fire, leaving them unable to breathe it!

I'm nitpicking, but every living creature needs water. Unless it's magic...

As much as I hate drawing on the 'but magic' defense, that's exactly what I'm going to do here. They get pretty much all they need from the minerals they eat. But they can drink water, or anything else for that matter, as Ember later demonstrated!

“Sorry, sister, but if you want it to stop, then water won’t help! Only this will!” Pinkie then produced a full jug of whole milk;

“Be assured that even a million Scoville units are no match for my magic!

Feel like a slightly wasted opportunity. Like, Midnight saying the burning can only be stopped by drinking (magically-enchanted) milk and then makes Pinkie's breasts lactate.

Oh, believe me, the idea did occur to me! But there's a couple reasons I didn't do it. First, Midnight wants to see how Pinkie wins without her help and also promised she wouldn't do anything aside from cleanse the capsaicin from Ember, and second, lactation is going to be a major fetish theme shortly with a different character. So I wanted to save it for her.

Anyway, great chapter. Oh Ember, you lost the moment Pinkie entered your lands.

She did indeed. But she's not upset over it all now! Time to get anthrofied, Ember! And you'll pass the portal for more fun shortly...

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He's either from Mexico or India...or his parents were from one each.

Makes sense. I used to have this Indian coworker who put ridiculous levels of spice on everything. We'd go to this restaurant that served some form of hot kimchi soup, and he'd order it at its highest spice level and then unload an entire small bottle of Tabasco into it as well. He'd eat the whole thing as sweat burst out in beads all over his face. All we could think was that his mouth was so numb from all the heat he'd ingested that the only way he could taste stuff now was to massively overspice it.

Orange Crush, Emerald Inferno, Red Hot, Rose Ruby (a rare and favorite gem of dragons) and Obsidian Ire

Frankly, always thought that not using Fire Ruby as a name was a lost oportunity here. It would really fit in-universe.

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Frankly, always thought that not using Fire Ruby as a name was a lost oportunity here. It would really fit in-universe.

I suppose it would, but I really wanted the Ruby Rose from RWBY reference here.
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Nice, nice. Lot's of Dragoness characters, very nice. Wish, they could be described a little more, though. Like height, horn shape, fitness and plumpness, to add some personality to them. But it must be really hard to juggle about 7 characters at the same time.

I finally came back and did this. Reread the chapter and tell me what you think.

Also, shame there was no Smoulder. Just for funsies. She would never Ember forget this moment.

I’ve found a way to bring Smoulder into the story later. I think you’ll like.

A bit sad that Rarity didn't got one in each hole initially because that's what dragons are made for aren't they?

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A bit sad that Rarity didn't got one in each hole initially because that's what dragons are made for aren't they?

Be patient! That doesn’t mean it’s not going to happen. I tend to save some things for later, after all.