well I admit I kind of get used to him and Rainbow, or actually to Soaring as a character himself. I probably let those stories here give me the wrong image of him and at some point I started to think she only loves him because of being a wonderbolt. While I can't really say that till it really happens, something must have it make look like that.
Yep I said I like it, but I'm honest with you, while this quite nice I'm not sure yet if I want to read a clopstory right now. If it is something like this then it helps if it are my favourite characters since there is no story plot that would distract me otherwise. Not sure if that makes sense I'm not always good with words, but I already admitted they or he isn'T my favourite and I'm not exactly in the mood for it.
I think I will keep an eye on your account though. Do you right something with a bit more story too?, or are that mostly loving encounters or how it is called (me trying to figure out my english again).
Did I get all the repeats? I'm kinda sick right now so I'm not all here. I remember I was gonna put that scene in one of two places...apparently I put it in both!
8551628 How is that Soarin's (Soarin''s? Double apostrophe?) fault? Whether or not a mother is carrying twins has nothing to do with the father; either the mother's body lets down two egg cells instead of one (dizygotic - fraternal), or the zygote splits into two (monozygotic - identical).
Neither Soarin' nor Rainbow Dash could've done anything about it, and the only places the blame can go to are the mother's reproductive system or the fertilised eggs, depending on the outcome.
I feel like SoarinDash experienced a bit of a dip, maybe not in popularity as far as actually people liking the ship but with quality art, stories and, perhaps related to it, lack of a Soarin, Wonderbolts and to some extent Rainbow-heavy canon material. This should change.
8551899 Yep, that's how twins work. Gender is determined by the male, while how many is determined by the female.
8552055 But...but then they can't have flying lessons...or first flights! :*(
Besides, I notated that both their families are pure-bred pegasi for many, many generations. Highly unlikely they would have anything that isn't a pegasus.
8552220 Yeah, I still like the ship a lot, but you're right. We need more Soarin'/Wonderbolts content!
8550745 There is such a thing called overdoing it. I get that Rainbow and Soaring love each other, so there's no need to say so half a dozen times.
It's the sort of thing where you'll want to let actions speak for you. For example, instead of saying "the dress is red" letting actions speak for you would be the equivalent of saying "the colour of her cheeks as I dipped her on the dance floor, it's the colour of her lips as I moved in for the kiss, and the colour of her dress as I spun her around".
8552601 In my experience, there's no such thing as saying 'I love you' too much to someone you love in real life.
8552828 As far as I know, as long as it's not showing any explicit bits, it's fine. I've been using cropped/'cleaned up' porn for the past 3+ years and I've never been notified about it being a violation of the ToS.
Cropped porn is under the "Borderline Content" part of the NSFW rules. It's up to staff discretion as to what's too much. I was always under the assumption cropped porn was not allowed. I must be thinking of a different site, because I swear I've heard it somewhere before.
8553032 It is, but clearly mine isn't on the wrong side of the border. All I see is Soarin' biting Rainbow's ear and her blushing. They could just be innocently playing and he pounced on her and caught her by surprise.
8553126 I like it. A pretty song and she has a pretty voice too.
8553240 I'll be writing on the next chapter soon, probably will have it done within a week. No promises though.
8553603 Well, glad my writing has the intended effect, even if it's so soon in the reading process for you, lol. Also, yeah, if even one person likes a ship, I guess it can't be sunk.
8575849 I don't believe she's ever been gutted before...this isn't that kinda story. Anyhow, if you meant rutted, than next chapter. As to WHEN the next chapter will be released, I just got commissioned again and am writing on that, so that takes priority of my creative juices.
8598863 No, I was doing a 24k word commission which should be released within the week, as well as soon will be doing another commission. I will finish this, as well as start my 500 sub's choice story, soon hopefully. It's just, commissions get priority.
Finally! A Clopfic were both of them are virgin! I hate when put the characters like if they got that type of relationships before, obviously the mane six and the other characters aren't like that, (maybe Cadence would be, but she is no more virgin).
Well, I view the MLP universe as being much more accepting or even encouraging of casual sex, given the disproportion of stallions to mares, as well as the fact that they have breeding seasons which are extremely uncomfortable without sexual relief for both genders. Therefore, virginity is generally lost by mares during their first estrus as fillies (whether by a colt in a protected romp, or by a dildo), so a pony still having virginity as a mare is somewhat unusual in my version of Equestria.
I currently have two commissions I'm working on and one in the wings, so I haven't had much time for my personal creativity. The chapter is about half done though.
8875013 - Wait wait I have a great idea to make this a lot better. -Okay what's that? -Add jets. -Jets?! Oh my god. Soarin: Umm. I'm stuck by the way like I'm jammed. -That's okay Soarin we'll help you out with some jets.
Might want to re-read this chapter cause some are repeated.
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I'm glad you understood it.
well I admit I kind of get used to him and Rainbow, or actually to Soaring as a character himself. I probably let those stories here give me the wrong image of him and at some point I started to think she only loves him because of being a wonderbolt. While I can't really say that till it really happens, something must have it make look like that.
Yep I said I like it, but I'm honest with you, while this quite nice I'm not sure yet if I want to read a clopstory right now. If it is something like this then it helps if it are my favourite characters since there is no story plot that would distract me otherwise.
Not sure if that makes sense I'm not always good with words, but I already admitted they or he isn'T my favourite and I'm not exactly in the mood for it.
I think I will keep an eye on your account though. Do you right something with a bit more story too?, or are that mostly loving encounters or how it is called (me trying to figure out my english again).
Yep, some parts are repeated.
Can confirm, if confirmation's needed.
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Did I get all the repeats? I'm kinda sick right now so I'm not all here. I remember I was gonna put that scene in one of two places...apparently I put it in both!
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Funny cuz I was considering her getting pregnant with twins. ♀🚼♂🚼
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Glad to see it had the intended result. I had the same warm and fuzzies writing it, so figured it might work well with others too.
Just as AWESOME as the first one. Also very accurate and scientific. LOVED IT!!!
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How is that Soarin's (Soarin''s? Double apostrophe?) fault?
Whether or not a mother is carrying twins has nothing to do with the father; either the mother's body lets down two egg cells instead of one (dizygotic - fraternal), or the zygote splits into two (monozygotic - identical).
Neither Soarin' nor Rainbow Dash could've done anything about it, and the only places the blame can go to are the mother's reproductive system or the fertilised eggs, depending on the outcome.
is it wrong that i want the foal to be a earth pony
I feel like SoarinDash experienced a bit of a dip, maybe not in popularity as far as actually people liking the ship but with quality art, stories and, perhaps related to it, lack of a Soarin, Wonderbolts and to some extent Rainbow-heavy canon material. This should change.
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Yep, that's my style. Glad you like it!
8551899
Yep, that's how twins work. Gender is determined by the male, while how many is determined by the female.
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But...but then they can't have flying lessons...or first flights! :*(
Besides, I notated that both their families are pure-bred pegasi for many, many generations. Highly unlikely they would have anything that isn't a pegasus.
8552220 Yeah, I still like the ship a lot, but you're right. We need more Soarin'/Wonderbolts content!
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i know thats why it would be such a good twist
8550745
There is such a thing called overdoing it. I get that Rainbow and Soaring love each other, so there's no need to say so half a dozen times.
It's the sort of thing where you'll want to let actions speak for you. For example, instead of saying "the dress is red" letting actions speak for you would be the equivalent of saying "the colour of her cheeks as I dipped her on the dance floor, it's the colour of her lips as I moved in for the kiss, and the colour of her dress as I spun her around".
>Sees cropped porn cover
We're allowed to use cropped porn now?
*Edits covers for sex-tagged stories*
Great job. I really enjoyed enjoyed reading it
8552601
In my experience, there's no such thing as saying 'I love you' too much to someone you love in real life.
8552828 As far as I know, as long as it's not showing any explicit bits, it's fine. I've been using cropped/'cleaned up' porn for the past 3+ years and I've never been notified about it being a violation of the ToS.
8552968 Thanks, glad you enjoyed my writing.
8553005
Cropped porn is under the "Borderline Content" part of the NSFW rules. It's up to staff discretion as to what's too much. I was always under the assumption cropped porn was not allowed. I must be thinking of a different site, because I swear I've heard it somewhere before.
I think of this song when reading this.
Warning: It's a country song.
ooooohohohohoho! as soon as i saw the title and description my dick went hard! also cant go down with a ship that cant sink :D
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It is, but clearly mine isn't on the wrong side of the border. All I see is Soarin' biting Rainbow's ear and her blushing. They could just be innocently playing and he pounced on her and caught her by surprise.
8553126
I like it. A pretty song and she has a pretty voice too.
8553240 I'll be writing on the next chapter soon, probably will have it done within a week. No promises though.
8553603 Well, glad my writing has the intended effect, even if it's so soon in the reading process for you, lol. Also, yeah, if even one person likes a ship, I guess it can't be sunk.
8553772
Excellent point. I never use cropped porn because I have a great relationship with the mods. (Sarcasm)
It's better that I don't test the waters.
like if u clopped
Soarin' shoots... and he scores!
... wrong joke?
Nah, it fits.
I approve of this. Rainbow Dash and Soarin make the cutest couple
8553781 Fair enough.
8553920 Glad you enjoyed it that much.
8555534 Yeah, it fits. He indeed scored big.
8560072 I approve as well.
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Sorry I missed your comment. Glad you liked it for the clop if nothing else I suppose.
Nice job!!!
I can't wait to see the next chappie!!!
Just wanna know when the next chapter is out.. This is all I wanna read right now and I am sorry for being impatient.
When is RD gonna get gutted again?!
I think I'll Shut Up now....
IDIDNOHINWONGDISTIME!!!
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I don't believe she's ever been gutted before...this isn't that kinda story. Anyhow, if you meant rutted, than next chapter. As to WHEN the next chapter will be released, I just got commissioned again and am writing on that, so that takes priority of my creative juices.
8565141 As above, no ETA as to when.
Sorry. My mistake
The calm before the storm...
I like it! What would you name the next one?
8592212
The Aftershocks.
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is the next chapter ready yet?
8598863
No, I was doing a 24k word commission which should be released within the week, as well as soon will be doing another commission. I will finish this, as well as start my 500 sub's choice story, soon hopefully. It's just, commissions get priority.
8606676
fair enough cause they paid to have there stuff done
Finally! A Clopfic were both of them are virgin! I hate when put the characters like if they got that type of relationships before, obviously the mane six and the other characters aren't like that, (maybe Cadence would be, but she is no more virgin).
8816335
Well, I view the MLP universe as being much more accepting or even encouraging of casual sex, given the disproportion of stallions to mares, as well as the fact that they have breeding seasons which are extremely uncomfortable without sexual relief for both genders. Therefore, virginity is generally lost by mares during their first estrus as fillies (whether by a colt in a protected romp, or by a dildo), so a pony still having virginity as a mare is somewhat unusual in my version of Equestria.
8836833
Yeah, but that sounds dangerously like mind control in Cadence's case. Able to control their romantic interests, and sexual instincts? Yeah...
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I love that idea! She can be more powerful than Celestia or Discord.
When is the next chapter coming? No rush, just curious.
8871614
I currently have two commissions I'm working on and one in the wings, so I haven't had much time for my personal creativity. The chapter is about half done though.
8875013
Ok. Thank you and again, no rush, I know life gets in the way, I haven't posted a chapter for about 2 months now myself.
8875013
- Wait wait I have a great idea to make this a lot better.
-Okay what's that?
-Add jets.
-Jets?! Oh my god.
Soarin: Umm. I'm stuck by the way like I'm jammed.
-That's okay Soarin we'll help you out with some jets.
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I'm just floating like... This is floating the most normal way it can float.