Nope.

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Not bad. Not bad at all. Thete are certainly worse out there.

Not a bad first attempt.

This is your guilty pleasure huh, Joe? :p

I do enjoy rape. I'll read with gusto.

The feeling of Celestia’s moist, inner walls squeezing tightly around my arm filled me with a sense of determination.

Oh God no. Don't tell me you used that fun, innocent game to describe an arm all up in Celestia.
Because if you did you're sick and I love you :D

The gleaming chamber of majestic ladies, awakening the fear and wonder in my heart. Letting the first blossom of the endearing rose fly into the night, all my purities devastated, I read.
Such a strong and powerful lust kept down in eternity, sings the song of pleasure and pain, resonating...I see red in my eyes, my mind couldn't take off knowing this is not for me. And yet, I still keep on going.
Love and tolerate, I know she will. And she will not stop until the dawn of the end, the finality I might not be able to see. But I'll wait, and I'll see to myself, if I could temper my soul and take it.
For my shameless curiosity? I wonder.

...Damn I'm so stoned!
Well for whatever it is, this story is a good read and I'll take it anyday. You describe things pretty well for a first clop, I've never read one myself to be honest but this gives me a good idea to stick with what I know. And you sir, or madame, this one will rise to the greatness, no doubt about it.

Hmmm...
*unsure if to fave this or not*
...
Ach zum Teufel, I´ll go straight to hell anyways.
*faves and likes*

loved it, really hope we'll see more of this, i hope susan can open her mind to the idea of pursuing love with a mare, this story has good potential, and human woman x mare stories are just so fucking rare!

For you Commander, likes all around.

kind of rapey

Snerk.

6617829 Well there's a "kind of" there for a reason, was having a debate with myself if was or not.

especially after learning that she maybe in heat

Probably supposed to be a "was" there. Also I'm pretty sure vaginal winking is strictly an equine thing.

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Also I'm pretty sure vaginal winking is strictly an equine thing.

NOPE

People can do it too and it's kinda weird.

Yet interesting nonetheless

6618238 Huh, never thought I'd learn that today.

Well I must say her internal conflict is predictable, which is to be expected given her circumstances. That said it is no less convincing by any means. That kind of conflict leads to the most character development after all.

nice!!!! Sequal?

Why is there an incomplete tag?

6628828 Because it's not complete silly

6628862 OH CRIPES YOU MEAN MORE IS COMING??!!

6628883 Well it is called "Seven Days of Heat", however, it may be a while since my top two other stories need tending to.

Oh, I didn't see you were the author, TLOMK and now this, I'm following you.

Well that was nice. Very, very nice.

The feeling of Celestia’s moist, inner walls squeezing tightly around my arm filled me with a sense of determination.

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so r u still working on this or is it basically dead