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I didn't expect to read about a Minotaur Civil war. I love surprises!
28k Words and the plot thickens!
Good chapter RF and AG, looking forward to the next one.
I see Ryan's about to earn himself a new title...the Minotaur Killer. Maybe. Well, since the other three will (probably) survive this civil war they'll be close to household names. See Gilda's parents choke on their exiled daughter being a hero of the Minotaur Civil War, I guess.
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Uuuuuuuggggggghhhhh, how could I miss that?!?!
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Hate to say it but this story is written with a lot of narrative ... intentionally mind you (expanding my writing styles) so there's going to be what seems like really slow instances. Once you get towards the latest chapter, and onwards it will have much more bang for the buck.
7248205 when she was talking about her roof trixie referred to herself as "me". I don't know if you missed that or if she is capable of not referring to herself in third person, but I thought I should mention it just in case.