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Why are the chapters so long?
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Because if you read each one out loud, it essentially accounts for Ryan's rambling storyteller methods and the time it would take to tell each part. He's thorough if not anything. Also he remember's things surprisingly well ... as mentioned in the story.
Aside from that, it's because I essentially have a day a chapter going on. Each of the chapters is one day in Ryan's adventure. Though I know that the length puts people off, I find it to be a better immersion aspect for the events. I dislike multiple single day events happening over many chapters, instead of them happening in a "boom, boom, boom" fashion.
6659448 Long chapters are good.
What a very rude thing to do to Gilda!
Just like the writers when they penned the script for Appleoosa's Most Wanted, even you forgot that Little Strongheart exists
Ryan's rambling seems to really fill up the chapter without much actually happening as a result of all his inconsequential asides. It gives life and character to him, but also makes the story drag on in bits and periods here. Honestly though, I don't like the choice of narration, if only because he offers so many juicy bits and then goes "But I'm not telling you, it's private."
I guess next chapter we might find Iron Will.
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Most of the stuff that gets passed over like that gets a third person telling. He usually only passes up moments when they aren't useful to the story or they are haunting.
This is in season 5 plus so the Buffalo tribe is a different one entirely. At least from my perspective on it.
It gets progressively more interesting as more stuff happens. The reason fir the rambling is me staying true to Ryan as a character and my cousin. He rambles often when telling stories.
MMMMMMMMMMOOOAAAAAARRRRRR!!!!!!!
I like it for the most part, but find Luna written much too modern, even like trixie and Gilda seem more canon then Luna. She just has a really odd personality here and weird mannerisms. Otherwise like it.