“Ugh...what a strange dream...” Twilight mumbled. She cracked an eye open and looked at the clock. Nine in the morning.
'Ugh...better get up...' she thought as she shifted slightly. She felt somepony in her arms. She smiled, it was obviously Luna. The smile turned to a frown when she realized something. She was slightly larger than this pony. She quickly looked down and saw Luna snuggled into her chest. She froze. She stayed frozen for a full minute before it clicked, it was a dream. But the dream was real. Just to make sure she looked around and there were indeed wings. She nudged Luna, causing her to stir.
“Morning Twilight...” Luna mumbled.
“Uh...Morning...” Twilight replied.
“By the way, now I know why you like to sleep like this.” Luna said, snuggling deeper into Twilight's chest, causing her to giggle.
“Luna...Do you know anything about why I'm like this?” Twilight asked.
“Yes...my parents allowed you to ascend. They left for Canterlot to speak to Celestia, the fact you are now awake tells me they have gone back to the moon and sun. they were using your magic.” Luna explained, getting serious.
“They said I am the element of Harmony...they told me what that means...but...what does that mean for my life here? Our lives?” Twilight asked.
“Neither Tia nor I would want to force you into anything, even if we could. I would follow you wherever you go.” Luna replied.
“Thank you...I guess we get to talk to her today anyways...what am I going to tell spike in my friends?” Twilight asked.
“Simple. You tell them the truth, well most of it. Mother and Father is somewhat of an Alicorn secret.” Luna said.
“A-alright...if...if you're there then I can do that...Spike! Come up here please!” Twilight finished wit ha call.
“He was there when it happened, but he will want an explanation.” Luna said. Twilight nodded.
“Twilight...so...you are a...a Princess now.” Spike said.
“I don't know about Princess...but I am an Alicorn I guess...I still don't know much...could you do me a favor and round up the girls?” Twilight asked.
“Yeah...” Spike started. “You want breakfast first?” he continued.
“No I'll take care of it, run along spike.” Luna said, getting up. Spike nodded and left. Twilight attempted to get up but found her body strangely weak.
“You rest. I'll be back, your body needs time to adjust.” Luna said. Twilight sighed in resignation.
Ten minutes later Luna came up with a fruit salad followed by her friends.
“So it's true...” Applejack muttered.
“That is so cool.” Rainbow Dash said.
“Oh...wow...you're um...pretty.” Fluttershy mumbled.
“Darling you look absolutely fabulous!” Rarity exclaimed.
“OH MY GOSH we need a party for this!” Pinkie yelled.
“Please calm down Everypony, she's rather weak right now. Here you go Love.” Luna said, levitating the salad over. Twilight smiled and accepted it. While she ate Luna answered the questions.
“So how did this happen?” Applejack asked.
“Magic has it's ways...I wish I could tell you the full truth, but it is not for me to tell. But I can say that Twilight met a very fine set of requirements.” Luna answered.
“How do you know that?” Rarity asked.
“Because I was here to experience it.” Luna replied.
“When did it happen?” Dash asked.
“Last night. I'd say around one in the morning.” Luna answered.
“She's normally asleep by then...” Pinkie commented.
“Yeah, were you two sleeping together?” Dash asked.
“Of course we w-” Luna started.
“What do you mean 'of course'?” Rarity asked.
“Oh dear...I forgot, we had only told Fluttershy.” Luna said with a sigh. They all looked at Fluttershy, who was now about the size of a small rabbit.
“Girls calm down, Luna and I are together...you didn't hear her call me 'love' when she gave me the food?” Twilight said, having finished.
“She did? You are?” Dash asked, confused.
“Whoa, canter on backwards a moment...how long ago did this happen?” Applejack asked.
“Morning after the party.” Twilight replied.
“Wait...so what...you two got drunk and did something or what?” Dash asked, still confused.
“No Dashie! I didn't notice it then but now that I think back to it I noticed they were really close...OH I KNOW! Princess Luna likes Twilight because of everything she did for her and Twilight just so happens to return the feeling!” Pinkie exclaimed.
“...wow Pinkie...Ah reckon that's the smartest thin you've ever come up with...” Applejack said, surprised at the fact something pinkie said making perfect sense.
“I guess you can say that. But anyways girls, we're all invited to Canterlot to spend the day with Celestia. We can talk more about everything then I guess...” Twilight said as she got to her feet. She stumbled a bit but quickly got the hang of her new height.
“Hey you're taller now...” Dash said.
“Yeah...I'm going to have to get used to this.” Twilight muttered as she awkwardly tried to fold her wings.
“Alright Twi, when we get back from Canterlot, or even IN Canterlot, I'm gonna teach you how to be a pegasus.” Dash said.
“Sure.” Twilight replied wit ha giggle.
“Oh now I'm going to have to get all of your new measurements and modify everything I made for you to fit now...oh but that's the fun in it!” Rarity exclaimed.
“Hang on wait! If you're an Alicorn now...what's like your special duty thingie?” Pinkie asked.
“I don't really know yet...it might have something to do with me being the Element of Magic...we can find out from Celestia.” Twilight answered.
“Oh, Ah almost forgot. Ah caught some weird creatures pokin' around the farm this mornin'...when Ah yelled at 'em fer takin' mah apples they apologized an' paid...any idea what they were?” Applejack asked.
“Those would be Changelings...Ponyville recently got a rather interesting sort of Neighbor...their Queen is going to accompany us to speak to Celestia as well.”
“Well shoot, seems like everythin's gotta wait 'till we go to Canterlot.” Applejack huffed.
“Well then let's get going!” Pinkie exclaimed.
“I don't trust myself to Teleport us all...any way for us to get a Chariot?” Twilight asked. Her question was answered by spike coughing up a green flame, a letter from Celestia hidden in it's hot core.
“Not gonna lie...that scared the buck outta me...” Spike said.
“Spike!” Twilight exclaimed.
“Sorry sorry!” Spike apologized.
“...Anyways...let's see what it says.
'Dear Twilight and Luna
I trust you are awake right now and have assembled your friends. I happen to know of the Changeling Queen and that she will be joining us here and is on her way already. A Chariot will arrive shortly to pick you all up. I hope I am able to answer any questions any of you may have. As for Twilight's Ascension, Luna and I will discuss this in private.
Princess Celestia'
Oh good. Well, that was conveniently timed.” Twilight read.
“How did she know about all of this stuff?” Dash asked.
“She has her ways. I give the chariot ten minutes. Are there any more questions that I can answer?” Luna asked. The others gained looks of deep thought as they wracked their brains for any questions that had answers Luna could give.
sorry for the dry chapter but the next few chapters are going to be filled with story. also, this would have gone up yesterday but fimfiction was derping
Loved it!
so good yet so rushed.....
Dammit I don't know wether I'm happy that I'm reading a good lunaXtwilight fic (one of my favorite pairings) that updates quickly or Upset that It could have been better if more time was taken writing it.
uhh.....
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694107 my speed doesn't effect the quality...this chapter was awkward, I didn't want to have them go to Canterlot until the next chapter yet I ran out of material three pages in so it seemed a bit rushed. glad you like it and I'll try to up the quality
Lovely chapter :)
Only thing I could point out is that sometimes you forgot the capitalization of the names, but apart from that there were no glaring mistakes
Can't wait for more!
Dark, you never end to impress me with your writing.
Twilight + Luna is my favorite pairing, probably as they are my two favorite characters.
Then we also have the alicorn Twilight.
The doctor approves:
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694160 oh god that brought me to the ground laughing so hard...
I understand that we all do this for the fame and not for the money. But you really should get your capitalization right.
Get it!? Capital and money.
Ok, ok. No more puns.
694195 eh that's one thing that always messes me up...I type pretty damn fast so sometimes my finger only taps the shift key so something doesn't get capitalized while other time i unconsciously capitalize the wrong words.
lovely chapter! a bit dry yes, but necessary story progression
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Alicorn Twilight is the best Twilight.
Spike's breath went off like it was mad, or something.
FILLER!!
Eh... short chapter is short. I agree with the aforementioned statements about errors as well, particularly in that you missed adding a gap directly between twilight talking with luna and spike getting in on the conversation. That needs a linebreak.
I liked It dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png Anyways, you might wanna check every time you write "with a" cause it seems to end up as "wit ha" and when I initially saw that I was all then figured it out xD
When is the next chapter? I need moar LunaxTwi!
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spike in my friends? that was the main thing that got me twas so halarious. ... i need to stop reading clop pardner yes ya do but i do wanna! well too bad. problem? anyway good update on to the next chapter
This chapter was not bad, but like you said, it felt a little... dry. The mane 5 took Twi's transformation way too well, when i think you could have played up their reactions much more. I forgot to comment about it on the last chapter, but i felt like you also could have been more descriptive with the ascension, Luna seemed to be very "meh" about the whole thing, and spike bursting in the room kinda killed my vision of them standing in the darkness an endless expanse of a galaxy. There is plenty of potential behind that idea!
Tldr: try to have your characters convey more emotions.
No need to rush the updates. Take your time and do your best! Your fans are rooting for you
695368 i'll get more in depth with the ascension in the next chapter worry not. as for more of that galaxy-like dream thingy...it felt like it wasn't really going anywhere so I cut it a bit short
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Multiple Personality Disorder much?
That said, I am liking this series.
this is great dude, cant wait for the rest
The lack of a reaction from her friends has been addressed, so I'll leave it alone.
I do, however, think that the chapter ended very suddenly. It felt not as though you rushed, or ran out of ideas, but more like you just cut it off at that last paragraph. I can practically see the rest of the chapter, hiding in the margins. I don't know, it just felt like an abrupt ending: "And then they all thought about stuff to ask for the next ten minutes."
699172 well that's kinda how i was making it, the suddenness wasn't intentional, it's just I didn't want to start canterlot and end it halfway through an explanation
699972 Well, still. You could have ended it at the arrival of the escorts, after the rest of the conversation, with something akin to "So, everypony ready to go?" I feel like something like that would have felt more natural.
Of course, it is up to you. If you have a plan that this works for, then go ahead, I'd love to see how it turns out.
700707 well i hope it works
As rarity said fabulous
Wow ive said it a lot but still......poor lil’ Spike