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6887602 I see what you do there an I approve.
6888385 Sorry about the confusion. I have the report showing the numbers for the groups of dead, wounded, and missing adding up to the one hundred percent. I have Shadow included in the wounded number along with Rock Buster.
As for him being a changeling? Well, I don't want to give any anything away or spoilers but, he isn't.
There are grammatical and spelling errors in this chapter.
Please reread it because I'm too lazy to point it out.
Found these. As for punctuation you're on your own. I've been told I have what may be a terminal case of commaitis.
'Well, that backed fired, [ back ] ?
she look down to the ground to broke the stare [ looked , break ]
We think tis not thou concern.” [ thy ] I think ?
“Shadow tis fine to tell art sister [ our ] again not sure not to up an old English
that until now had been forgetting [ forgotten ]
Shadow decided to wait before he do himself [did]
“Well I wanted ti take a closer look [ to ]
decide if it was scarp or recoverable [ scrap ]
pony through the use of magically means [ magical ]
stars and diamonds in her eye she gave several quick blinks to try and clear his eyes. [ he ]
In addition I agree with Shadow, it's none of Celestias business. Luna is so far over the age of consent she can't even see it.
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