That ending, just that ending! Good way to end a Chap!

6511378 Shadow's special but I don't know if I'd call him Special Forces. For the moment I see him as a member of an actually Guard unit and not a member of a ceremonial one. Regardless, military types in my experience act like they're the greatest thing ever. I blame all the brainwashing and indoctrination we go through.

6511770 I'll admit this is the first time I've actually done a character like Shadow and didn't imagine I'd have this much fun with my writing. I'm hoping the development I've got in my notes goes well or explains well enough what has changed him.

6538056 Yeah, Shadow's a bit of a slow learner and enjoys messing with minds it seems. Also Twilight just seems so easy to play mind games on.

6511378 That was a last minute change I thought a could get more out of and it seems to have worked. Plus, it's factually.

Thanks for all the feedback! It's great knowing this is making people laugh. I'm still surprised and pleased I've got such positive feedback and reviews, I've got all of you to thank for that. Thanks for the time and hope to see you back next chapter.

P.S. Did I use that last comma right?

6544169 Shadow=

By the time they were all settled Spike had returned with drinks for the sober before sitting with Twilight.

is this turning into MASH with hawkeye and his bunk mates having a distillery

“YOU'RE DOING WHAT!”

oh wait you are drinking coffee ok