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6611750 6614481 I do believe I've settled your pondering with this chapter. Now you have to wait to see what I have in store for those on the other side of the mirror.
6610519 Thanks once again for the feedback. I know I can't catch all my mistakes and having you catch them helps improve the story and my writing.
Good Grief... So smart and so stupid at once. Though I do wonder, we often see fics where Celestia's "mistakes" are just her orchestrating events, I'd love to see Shadow just melt down if that's the case in this story. That Celly gets so angry with him because dude keeps messing up her Batman Gambits ! Messing up planned events and not responding like a good little pawn when she reworks plans to place him where she wants.
i like Shadow and his deminor. i Think all of his critesism has a valid Point. but what i dont like is what you make Celestai and Luna do to him in the first chapter where they imlpy that Luna was going to kill him and where they just scared him out of his mind on a joke and then fire him for breach of conduct if I'm not mistaken and fire him even though its planly their fault.
Naturally, the first thing Shadow does after acquiring feet is insert them in his mouth.
I always look forward to new chapters, just for the sheer amount of laughs. Great chapter once again.
1. No, but Luna does. If she'd had more flux she'd most likely have put guards.
2. That is a possibility. Or she just feels like allowing stupid shit to happen.
Howdy everyone! Sorry for the lack of an update last week, I was the sick and a typhoon to deal with. I'll be putting two chapters this update to make up for it. Also I'll be trying to find some extra time to put a chapter or some extra material in the bank to try and stop this from happening again.
Hope everyone had a Happy Thanksgiving and not a cleverly disguised intervention.
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