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6676943 6677012 Not this time around and I need some of the events of the EQ movies and my own set within to setup future events.
6677156 I'm hoping you enjoyed Shadow's latest reaction concerning probability.
Thanks again for stopping in and giving a read.
A few questions: When did you come to the conclusion that it's simply not worth continuing your faithful service to the crown? What brought about this revelation? Why in your decision to turn did you devote yourself to aiding a Black-magic traitor of the nation? Finally, how the buck did you think you could get off scotch-free and without a court-martial or a thorough ass-whoopin'?
I feel like this is the weakest chapter of the story, so far.
Shadow abruptly and inexplicably shifts from thinking like a soldier to thinking like a civilian.
A few chapters ago, he said, "Damn the consequences." and charged in there blindly, to get the crown back. Now he's observing passively, while his nation's best defense is disabled, and his protectee has been baited out into the open.
Also, most of this chapter was just a summary of the movie.