Other than some logical mistakes, grammar mistakes and psychological mistakes this was ok, better than the other chapters anyway. Keep at it, you'll get better with age.
I’ve been wondering and gotta ask, what was the point of the party meant for Drake that he missed, as in why did you have it happen. Maybe there’s something in the later chapters, but I personally don’t see a way that it makes anything in the future happen.
What just happened?
Woohoo! A new chapter.
Yes!
Welcome back
Other than some logical mistakes, grammar mistakes and psychological mistakes this was ok, better than the other chapters anyway. Keep at it, you'll get better with age.
Ok.
I thinking more mare be in harem.
Sweet! new chapter! Please keep it coming.
I don't think the mares are getting their commueppance any time soon
this is a better remake of this chapter and better direction and i can see tonoe showing up soon hope to see a new chapter soon
I’ve been wondering and gotta ask, what was the point of the party meant for Drake that he missed, as in why did you have it happen. Maybe there’s something in the later chapters, but I personally don’t see a way that it makes anything in the future happen.