PLS SHIP

*Sniff, Sniff* I smell a threeway

7679374 Probs don't smell that good, aye?

its ok.... you REALLY need an editor.. there is so much wrong with this. :(

"Actually it's everywhere and we aren't sure why the ratio is so off," Celestia said as she shrugged. "No matter what we try the number of fillies borned compared to colts is always higher and it is because of this that we allow herds and harems." Drake looked at Celestia quizzically as he thought they herds and harems were the same thing and Celestia continued to explain when she saw this. "Herds usually consist of a single stallion that is courted with three to five mares. A harem is much bigger as it consists of a stallion having many more mares to call his lovers but of course there are a few that are fine with just being a couple as well."

Just born

that fact that you did a gender swap can make or break this story, because whenever i have read a gender swap story it usually goes down hill and has massive cringe and i hope yours doesnt do that and has minimal cringe.