Though it does contradict before in Chapter 3 when the killer said "2 down, 3 more to go". If the killer is Twilight, it would have only been 2 more to go. :p
1688 Oh, you'll see. The killer in that chapter could have been Twilight, Spike, or one of the other three helping Ditzy. Or even somepony else who is in on the secret that Twilight forgot to mention. Don't you think that in the midst of killing, one would take the chance of getting to kill somepony who might have angered them in the past...?
Luna's reaction at the end makes me wonder what she knows. At any rate it will be nice if two sides are fighting on somewhat even terms for a bit rather than just being a slam all the way for the 'bad guys'
2750 I'm pretty much finished. I'm planning on going through and check for spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes and stuff, but the plot is set for good.
2783 The Cough? Never heard of it. Being a huge fan of grimdark myself, I'll have to check it out. I'm glad that you plan on reading my story sometime, though!
HOLY B*CK, twilight?!?!? Ma'am, for once in my life I am at a loss for words......screw that. This is absolutly terrifying, it shattered my previous thought of who it was, and nearly destroyed the image of one of my favorites! However, this is amazingly well-written, and is now one of my top two stories on this site. I cannot believe that a grimdark, a catagory I usualy tend to avoid, is now in my tops. Congratulations, I simply do not know what else to say.
Oh... oh my.
That was... very sad.
but nice writing....
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Thanks!
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Really? I thought that story was Hilarious!
What a twist!
Though it does contradict before in Chapter 3 when the killer said "2 down, 3 more to go". If the killer is Twilight, it would have only been 2 more to go. :p
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Oh, you'll see.
The killer in that chapter could have been Twilight, Spike, or one of the other three helping Ditzy. Or even somepony else who is in on the secret that Twilight forgot to mention.
Don't you think that in the midst of killing, one would take the chance of getting to kill somepony who might have angered them in the past...?
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Have you actually done this yet? I'm thinking of reading the story, but not if you haven't done the major plot editing yet.
Luna's reaction at the end makes me wonder what she knows. At any rate it will be nice if two sides are fighting on somewhat even terms for a bit rather than just being a slam all the way for the 'bad guys'
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I'm pretty much finished. I'm planning on going through and check for spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes and stuff, but the plot is set for good.
2783
The Cough? Never heard of it. Being a huge fan of grimdark myself, I'll have to check it out.
I'm glad that you plan on reading my story sometime, though!
I want to stop reading this yet... but for some reason i cant!! Curse you good sir.
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*Ma'am not sir
I'm glad that you're enjoying it!
Wait, you aren't enjoying it that much, are you?
Then, I'm glad you're reading it anyway!
Umm, so was K, spike?
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If you haven't read all the chapters, then I cannot tell you.
If you have, then figure it yourself.
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Thanks for the help! I'll be sure to fix those things.
J-Jesus Christ...
Twilight is now my mortal enemy and no longer on 3 in my favourite pony list.
HOLY B*CK, twilight?!?!? Ma'am, for once in my life I am at a loss for words......screw that. This is absolutly terrifying, it shattered my previous thought of who it was, and nearly destroyed the image of one of my favorites! However, this is amazingly well-written, and is now one of my top two stories on this site. I cannot believe that a grimdark, a catagory I usualy tend to avoid, is now in my tops. Congratulations, I simply do not know what else to say.
T'was Twilight?
How . . . Fun!
Okay...so Twilight, Spike, Celestia, Gilda, Ditzy and this X/Z person are all on it. Wow.