1395 I'm extremely tired today (only five hours of sleep last night) so sorry for any confusion; Throughout the story Nadiya (my friend who is helping with editing/basic plot) and I are trying to keep the killer's identity at a half and half sort of thing. For example, in Grandmother's Mirror, Rarity comes up with the idea that Spike is the killer. Yet, in Ditzy Delivers, Ditzy does not actually say the name of "the boss" so therefore is could be Spike or it could be some other pony. (or maybe it's not even a pony...) So if by that you meant "Say the killers name first so we know who it is" the point is so that you DON'T know who it is, exactly. Sorry for the rant
Evil Derpy is the best Derpy.
1352
so true
1395
I'm extremely tired today (only five hours of sleep last night) so sorry for any confusion;
Throughout the story Nadiya (my friend who is helping with editing/basic plot) and I are trying to keep the killer's identity at a half and half sort of thing.
For example, in Grandmother's Mirror, Rarity comes up with the idea that Spike is the killer.
Yet, in Ditzy Delivers, Ditzy does not actually say the name of "the boss"
so therefore is could be Spike or it could be some other pony. (or maybe it's not even a pony...)
So if by that you meant "Say the killers name first so we know who it is" the point is so that you DON'T know who it is, exactly.
Sorry for the rant
I am quite literally on the verge of vomiting right now. Not badly written, however.
I have a sneaking suspicion. I just hope I'm wrong.
1408
Ohh is it really that good? I don't want you to vomit but I'm happy that it gave you some sort of emotion!
:derpyderp1:
1460
Derpy killing somepony? Now THAT is quality matterial!
Too bad that other pony died and all though.
But Then Big Mac Died Not Much Later
I love Derpy even more now.
1473 You're realy bucked up you know.
My idea from a few chapters ago has not been shown negative yet, we will see. Once again, very nice little bit of shock for the CMCs, good writing
This story is Toataly AWESOME!