The Elements' Demise
written by Amber Sin
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You... You... MONSTER!!!!
Good heavens, good heavens! YOU MONSTER!
But nice writing.
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I know, I'm horrible. But thanks :D
...It's Spike isn't it?
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Maybe ._.
or maybe it's an OC pony. Who knows :D
591 YOU... YOU MONSTER!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pro-tip Dashie: Say the killer's name first.
It's spike. Who else in Ponyville is 1. Well known enough by the mane 6 that they trust them implicitly under these circumstances
2. Has fingers?
3 wants to keep Rarity alive?
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<-- Oh wait...she's dead. Um... 
There.
That...actually makes sense. MYSTERY SOLVED!!!
The Killer Is...THE READER
Its always the one you least suspect.....spike?
What do you mean monster? "K's" actions and the way the story is arranged is art!
If the story was edited properly this would be something really good for Nightmare Night!
i can actually see it being somepony besides spike.......tho that thought worries me quite a bit.....either way, as before, phenomanal (cannot spell) writing, horrifying, but great
Okay, this chapter just makes me want to barf. It's like cupcakes, except pinky is the one having her organs ripped out. I could never finish Cupcakes. Why did I even start it? Why did I start this? I don't even like gore! Why would I like gore? Who really likes gore? Gore is disgusting. WHY AM I READING THIS!!!!