As much as I HATE the concept of this story, I must say that this is written pretty damn well.
Also, just out of curiosity, back in chapter three you had the killer say the line "Eeyup, you're at a party alright". Did you throw that Eeyup in as a red herring? The first thing I thought when I read that was Big Mac noooo.
Ok, quite a bit this time. First: ITS YOUR FIRST FIC?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!!?? HOW THE FUCK IS THAT POSSIBLE?!?!?! the quality is astounding! I have read best sellers that weren't as good as this!!!! Second, Moku5, i thought big mac as well, simply because many people tell me i am similar to him (I don't see it but oh well) and started using it, so I thought it was him. and lastly, for the love of all Equestria, DONT KILL SPIKE!!!
I just have one thing to say:
Why.
WHY.
WWWHHHHYYYYYYYYY.
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Okay, one other thing:
THIS HAD BETTER NOT BE THE LAST CHAPTER!
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Oh, it's not.
There's a few more chapters left.
Like, maybe three or four.
Yeah if I was Spike, I'd be looking for escape when Twilight said I wouldn't ever have to worry about that again.
Wow, interesting plot threads here. And making Gilda sympathetic! Nice work.
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Thanks!
This actually means a lot to me. This being my first fanfiction and all.
This is such a great story. I love it.
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Thank you!
I love that you love it.
As much as I HATE the concept of this story, I must say that this is written pretty damn well.
Also, just out of curiosity, back in chapter three you had the killer say the line "Eeyup, you're at a party alright". Did you throw that Eeyup in as a red herring? The first thing I thought when I read that was Big Mac noooo.
Or was I just over analyzing XD
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Over analyzing.
It's just a saying I like a lot.
*Uncontrolable and highly audiable sobbing*
Ok, quite a bit this time.
First: ITS YOUR FIRST FIC?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!!?? HOW THE FUCK IS THAT POSSIBLE?!?!?! the quality is astounding! I have read best sellers that weren't as good as this!!!!
Second, Moku5, i thought big mac as well, simply because many people tell me i am similar to him (I don't see it but oh well) and started using it, so I thought it was him.
and lastly, for the love of all Equestria, DONT KILL SPIKE!!!