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Didn't get to see how they got Cadance. Shame.
Um, hang on. If Celestia and Luna become willing sex slaves... who's gonna raise the sun and moon?
I first started reading this story when I had a bit of a fetish for this sort of thing. another story kind of really made me hate this sort of thing save for one or two exceptions. I read the first chapter of this last year right before that, it's the mind warping part that really just gets to me. I only really came back to this story to finish it, I have an ocd thing that just wouldn't let me forget it. anyway I made it to chapter for. an thankfully it's enough to satisfy my ocd. that part where celestia was dragged to the bed raped and had her mind warped really fucked with me though.... still is.
i got to the part where shining armor got turned female and couldn't continue. you disgust me.
i used to respect you. fuck you. with all of my heart and mind i say fuck you. to the depth of my soul i say fuck you. with every atom, with every molecule, with every last particle of my being i say fuck you, you sad little cretin
Will Gleaming Shield be back?
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Oh well, that's just like your opinion, man.
6953507 I hope she comes back.
6836435 defiantly. that's the point in which this story truly began to disgust me. but unfortunately im one of those people who can't get an unfinished story out of my mind until I at least get caught up with this story im unable to forget about it. I've been tying to convince the author to move the ending with the changlings destroyed and such but he won't listen. im down to begging and bribing at this point.
Would be funny if Celestia would be Twilight's pet to breed more pets.
every so often this chapter forces it's way into my mind, the horrors that happen in the second half anyway. I just can't help but to come back to it, it's like a trainreck, horrifying but I can't look away. it honestly disgusts me and makes no god damned sense. first off the biggest thing about this story is that no mare is taken against their will, freedom of choice is by far the most emphasized thing in this story, at least by the changelings. and then all of a sudden twilight turns her brother into a mare without asking consent, regardless if shining is ok with it which she isn't. you can rationalize it all you want HE isn't. the changelings are the enemies, the bad guys, he hates them with a passion, there is no way other than mind warping or mind control that he isn't going to feel nothing but complete disgust and hatred for them, same with cadence and celestia but i'll get to that in a moment. his own sister orders them to turn him into a mare, and just walks away happily as they dive in and he gets violently raped by FIVE changelings, and then months later where he should have just been utterly Brocken into a mindless husk or hated not only his wife for leaving him for dead and letting their most hated enemy fuck Cadense's first child into her instead of him, his sister for what she had done to him, and the changelings for what they did to him. but no, by the magic of the author he walks out all oohhhh my head, and actually defends those monsters.
we first see Cadence, whom has nothing but the utmost hatred and disgust at chrysalis, happily getting fucked and knocked up by chrysalis herself. Celestia whom has just as much hatred for chrysalis and then some, gets dragged to the bed KICKING AND SCREAMING THAN HAD HER SCREAMS OF HORROR BRODCASTED ACROSS THE ENTIRE HIVE all the while twilight is resting happily as her "master" breaks rule number one by dragging her former mentor and raping her. now if a stallion had done this to celestia it's open season on them, and celestia would have logically just hated them eternally, but since it was her most hated enemy it was perfectly fine!
like I said. NO. GOD. DAMNED. SENSE. the thing is, the author really doesn't seem to want there to be any death of any kind in here, he just wants it to be a happy ending where everybody just moves on like non of it ever happened.
verysleep, look I know you couldn't have blocked me since I can still post, so please, i'm speaking directly to you. I know I have said some bad things about this story and in general, and the wording came out a bit to harsh or maybe a bit offensive and in some cases extremely offensive and worrying. honestly the thing that made me dislike the story was because of the gender bending and my world ending view of it, and for those things I am sorry. but honestly, it would make your story a lot better if you actually did some good cause and effect. make it so shining actually hates the changelings for what they did to him, same with the other stallions, actually make it challenging for the lings! make it so blueblood found a way to harness and reproduce hatred artificially or something, you know, some stuff that makes sense, hell if your willing maybe even a colab with some readers, take some of their ideas to improve the fic! in the end I don't know if I can actually persuade you to do any of these things, but seriously, talk to me or something, there is a lot of untapped potential in this fic that it could very well turn into a trilogy, you just need to let go of the idea of everything but the absolute worst of the stallions getting punished, like ones that were convicted felons before the invasion, hay there's an idea, make it so that like 70% of the stallions currently in the dungeon were only out because the nation went to shit and the guards weren't there to keep them locked up, 20% were stallions that watched their wives and marefreinds fuck a changeling right in front of them and were bitter and angry at all mares after the event, and like 10% were stallions like flash that were just scum to begin with but were smart enough not to act on those urges until shit hit the fan like this invasion.
another idea, one that I am certain you won't take or listen to but is one of the many I have thought about in this fic is soul magic. anyway the idea behind soul magic is at the core of every soul is a sort of framework, a male and female framework to be exact. a males soul is extremely rigged and tough like a diamond rod but like a diamond rod is not malleable and cannot be changed. a female's soul is soft and moldable like a lump of clay. soul magic would be able to do one of two things heal and connect souls. the first one is obvious, the second one will take some explaining. once a soul is connected to another soul or into a sort of network of souls connected to one another they can feel the what the other is feeling and talk to one another as if they were right next to one another no matter the distance and without magic. this would be one way that the appaloosa ponies were able to find out what was happening in the hive since shining armor and any other guard unfortunate enough to be captured would share information while begging for help. this idea could be used in so many different ways like blueblood planting spies and such.
now that the bases of the idea is set this is where things get grimdark. now, this idea is a bit grim dark so ima put in a large word below this part for those of you that don't want grim dark. now the parts that play into the story would be this, when and individual's soul is put through enough torment, be it physical pain or philological torture like rape, damages the soul. a females soul would be a lot weaker since it's soft, but can heal a lot better than a males soul, a males soul could take more damage, but would not be able to heal as well. once a soul is damaged enough it starts to crack, once it reaches a certain point it shatters, further still those pieces start to fade into oblivion. no afterlife, no eternal rest, the soul just stops existing as if it was never born. now this is where things get a bit complicated, since stallions, or males in general are dominant in nature and are very MALE minded they cannot handle being a female and being one is the highest torment a stallion can experience. a mare is submissive and very open minded and adaptable. a mare's soul can take up to 80% damage before it cracks, 90% before it shatters, and 95% before the pieces start to fade. a male's soul on the other hand, while can take a lot more torment, is tormented more by things a mare could effectively adapt to and accept, like having their gender switched. a stallions soul can take up to 50% damage before it cracks, 60% before it shatters, and 80% before it fades. now in each stage there are different emotions that can signify what stage they are at, before their soul cracks they are in a state of constant horror and hatred, once their soul cracks they are in constant despair and anger, completely apathetic to the world around them. once the soul shatters they become empty husks that while may have a near constant stream of tears flowing from their eyes and have empty droopy expressions that make Maud look happy, but in truth they are all but gone, they feel nothing but misery and despair. once their soul fragments start to fade they segment off, one soul fragment, while still hating the situation that got it to this point, will accept it in attempt to hold out so that it might be saved, the rest will fade, and once the last one fades the body is officially dead inside, and is just an empty husk, nothing but a corpse that has not yet been allowed to die. the thing about this would be that twilight later finds out how many souls have been destroyed thanks to her actions and reconsider her opinion of the changelings knowing they raped the stallions and were no better than stallions like blueblood, this could be done in part allowing for some stallions being untouched while others that were violently raped like shining armor would be nearly Brocken.
TURNIP
for those of you that read the idea, what do you think? for the others, well I wasn't expecting much from the second part of it.
now back to you verysleepy, please, allow for some actual consequences such as shining not actually thinking of them as nothing but monsters for what they did to him. I know I am biased on the point of the stallions being forced into becoming mares, but even when it is consensual I hate it, when it happens like this and turns into violent rape can you blame me?
so, when will tirek or discord show up, tirek will most likely try and take their power, discord he might at first watch the chaos?
I know this is a consensual rape fetish story, but someone needs to have a long talk with Chrissy(and possibly the author) about what qualifies, and more importantly doesn't qualify as consent. This stuff about all of this being consentual? False. You don't mind control someone, then ask them if they're okay with that. It doesn't work that way.
That being said, I know what this story is and won't hate it too much...I'll still hate parts though.
8126913 here's an idea. Pull your head out of your butt and realizing your complaining about consent in a fictional story about fictional characters in a fictional universe that isn't canon to the show let alone in away a realistic possibility.
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If you dont like it, dont read it. Im pretty sure (hopefully) that everyone here recognizes this is not real consent, and would be in no way shape or form okay in the real world at all, so just let some people have their fap time without others criticizing them.
The sex is hot but I think you could do a little more worldbuilding. Like is that drone that plugged redheart of special rank?
You are good with the sex but you could still improve on the characterization. I would for example imagine Chrysalis would have a much more malicious and teasing persona. Taunting others and that Twilight would be worried seeing Cadance be a rival for her master's affection.
That awkward moment when you remember I didn't make up the gender swap spell but it's actually a real thing from MLP canon...