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Chapter two is up! Hope you all enjoy.
I certainly enjoyed this chapter.
Personally I wouldn't trust the Royal guards for anything. I mean seriously, what have they ever actually done that's been useful?
And yep, I was suspicious as soon as the whole stripping thing occurred. If they were really looking for corruption, wouldn't they actually scan the mares themselves?
So they keep arresting innocent stallion for the things the Changelings do?
Wow. I'd really be p*ssed if I were them. I hope they get some chance to repay the 'lings for this.
6195812 Yeah stallions and mares really get shafted in this story. In different ways however.
6195836 Gender swap them in the next chapter please.
At this point I don't see the stallions getting any breaks. Chances are they will either be trapped in cocoons or kept under mind control and used as slave labor.
Next chapter I hope we get to find out what is happening with the mares at the hive.
6199666 that sounds like a pretty good idea actually. I wonder how many people would object to that.
6200433 Depends on who you turn into a mare, Gleaming Shield Princess Bluebell are a couple of good examples.
>>Very Sleepy
I would like to hope that their gender is changed to the female from the male and they will heartily be given the opportunity of pregnancy. =)
oh well, What do about the sex treatment of menopause ponies? It is still likely to be given their chance of activation of the ovaries if they have are sexual body.
6206837 While we're on that what about the foals? Should we age them up as well?
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I think it should not give the vaginal or anal fucks except oral for the foals. rather than they should serve to support the sexual hunger of changeling.
6214211![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
You can't write foalcon if the foals are anthro, or human. I think knighty's worried that if we do allow it then some countries won't be able to view this site. Either way, the author will have to age up the foals or straight up not include them; those are the rules.
6223203 Why do you think I suggested aging them up to the right age?
6223214![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
Oh... my mistake then.
When is next chapter?
6223562 I'm about half-way done with it. Writing the sex is hard.
6223749 I know this Is clop and I should not overthink it. But a part of me believes that is all the mares have changeling babies We will end up with the extincion of the pony race.
What happened to the CMC? Were they also legal age or are they 'waiting' till the time is right for them to have foals?
6233112 I've thought of all of that for the next chapter. Everything except where everyone goes to the bathroom.
6233819 The CMC are in the story and legal age. I just choose to ignore writing any parts regarding pregnancy with them.
6233942 What about future chapters?
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6836313 UNEXCEPTIONABLE!!!
Hot but there is still room for improvement. Mostly I would expect Chrysalis to be a little more tactical and use things like shame and excitement.
You could add that the ones who refuse are prudes and too ashamed of themselves.
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(I can sympathize, even if this is months later)
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