A new chapter?! So soon?! What madness is this?!

Seriously, though, loved this chapter! More! Soon! Please!!!

Anyway, it looks like Twilight and the others are quickly putting their plan into action. With this kind of start, the traitors who banished them, Celestia and Luna aren't gonna know what hit 'em!

Although I'm curious as to why Twi did this:

she quickly scooped a stunned little Dinky up in her magic and held her out into the wave.

Is it because she remembers Dinky as a friend from Ponyville? Or what?

(I don't want you to give anything away before its time; I'm just sorta curious.)

And this

Dinky had been brought in during her elementary years, much like Sunny had, and had been a frequent target of the teachers' wrath. Being that her mom was allegedly a pegasus, and one with mental and physical problems at that, she wasn't one of the vaunted purebloods.

made me all kinds of pissed off! Ditzy (or is she called "Derpy" in this?) may be wall-eyed and clumsy, but she's a good mare, and a wonderful mother to Dinky, and having her foal taken away from her just because she's a pegasus, and not a unicorn, is all kinds of wrong.

You know, the more that I read of this, the more I'm beginning to be convinced that the reason for the Great Betrayal, and the banishments of the Sisters, Twilight, Cadance and the other girls, is because the traitors who did it were (and likely still are!) a bunch of disgusting, worthless, bigoted, tribalist, superior-minded unicorns who wanted to turn a nation founded on harmony and racial tolerance into a unicornian paradise (the "true" Equestria, as it was intimated in Chapter 1), where they could do what they wanted to to the members of the other two tribes without interference from their rightful rulers, the former Element Bearers, or the Princess of Love!

Hence my reinstated belief that Blueblood was neck-deep in it all. Mainly because of the way he's always acted toward those he...and his ilk...have always treated those they consider their inferiors.

...

My God, I just thought of something! Your unicorns in this story are Equestria's versions of Hilter and his Nazis!!! And they think that they are the so-called "Master Race"!

Well done! You've given me villains that I can absolutely hate!

Which is what will be soooooo very satisfying when Twilight and the others bring their corrupt little elitist "paradise" crashing down around their snobbish, bigoted ears!

One quick question before I close, though. With what we know happened to Twilight and the others, what happened to Spike and Discord?

(Hopefully, they're both in the Crystal Empire with Shining (and also hopefully, Shining and Twi's parents).)

6130292 Hehehe, the question is, which Equestria is worse? A new Realm of Lust, or Nazi Equestria? :3

We'll be seeing the CMC reeeeal soon!

Ah damn. Another racist Unicorn verse. Oh well.

What happened to Snips and Snails, though? They're Unicorns. And not even all that bad with magic, considering Snails managed to light his horn when Sweetie Belle couldn't even twinkle yet.

I managed to read this. I dont like foalcon, but I made it through. I just hope we see some adult action soon. Oh well keep up the good work anyways.

6130517 You shall see, don't worry. ^___^

6130526 Don't worry, there will be some soon, though first we have to get through the school chapters.

6130434 That's...a very good question, actually.

I guess we'll just have to wait and see what you have in store for us in the future of this story, though, huh, bro?

As to the CMC, that's good to know.

Although I'm a little nervous as to Apple Bloom and Scootaloo's fates have been thus far (what with neither of them being unicorns (duh)).

And Sweetie, being a unicorn; well, I'm not sure that I want to know.

Do I?

(Although I'm assuming (yeah, yeah, I know. Never assume anything) that, being a unicorn, she ended up in the School for Gifted Unicorns, like Dinky did.)

Am I right?

Or wrong?

Loved the Twilight part. Liked the Applejack/Fluttershy part. Really disliked the implications of the Applejack portion. It sounds like all of those little foals are going to be trapped in those plants for a very long time when all the others just get stronger and slightly hornier (minus Hot Shot, but he deserved it and I doubt that the thestrals can gangbang him forever). Unless you plan on going overboard with the horniness, in which case this entire endeavor is about as well thought out as Nightmare Moon's "eternal night" with similarly disastrous results. I do not want to see the world burn just because seven ponies got sent to hell. On the same note, please tell me they took that other filly off of the ceiling. Pppllleeeaaassseee?

6131044 Hehe, oh don't worry, they'll be coming out of the plants. Not the same as they WERE, but they'll be coming out. And yes, Green Leaves is off the ceiling now. ^___^

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Great! As long as the new demons aren't permanent slaves to their creators...

6131100 *grins* Depends on what you mean by slaves.

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As long as they can have lives outside of "have sex with x, y, or z". Even if that life is "have sex with q".

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if someone masturbates to your clopfic then you can safely say that you did a great job, eh? no problem in seeing one of those types of comments. then again, it's just my thought.

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not noticing the grinning peach-colored mare that blended into one of the stalks of a tree that had grown up in the middle of the greenhouse.

Umm... Is that Green Leaves or am i just mixed up?

6132012 Oh don't worry, they'll be coming out of the plants. :) They certainly aren't trapped.

6132420 Nope! That was Applejack, hiding. xP

6132791 well you gave them both peach colored fur, so can ya blame me? You never bothered to mention the mane color in the green house, just the coat. Though i guess you could say it was obviously AJ, but then again you never know.

I'm sorta curious what fate befell Prince Blueblood in this universe.

Sure, he's an unmitigated and entitled ass, but to me personally at least he's never seemed like the traitorous type. Since he's also nobility that has a rather straight downward type implications.

If so, I'm really curious just how much or how little a minor eternity in Tartarus has effected him. Was he too soft and is currently bound and ball-gagged in some demonesses pleasure pit? Or did such a twisted place force him to grow and toughen up?

Again, my own read of him makes me doubt it, but even the rater tired 'Blueblood was the problem all along' plot could be kinda interesting in this verse. I barely want to imagene what type of reaction Rarity would have if he's been eating grapes and cheese for the minor eternity she's been in pony-hell.

Hell hath no fury, and all that.

So yeah, hope that gets addressed. Sounds interesting near any way it plays out.

are you going to put a new chapter?

6138047 Yep! Putting on the finishing touches.

6138330 when it been ready?

6130434 either way, to quote Atton Rand from KoTOR I I, "I've got a bad feeling about this". Regardless, still really good. Seriously though, I've got a bad feeling about this.

Oh Magic

I never noticed this before, but Sunny practically swore to Twilight here.

6138330 eermmm may I ask you where you got that profile picture? Jus wandering ~(~.~)~