Fine Crime has been chosen by Celestia personally to undertake a job he has never wanted. Yet obvious curses can be hidden blessings, for Fine realizes his job is more than just to serve Celestia. He must find a way... to end her.
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I'm glad you decided to show us this chapter. To me the scenes seem rather important to establish to relationship and bond between Fleur and Fine. The seeds are to my opinion the most important part of a character builds. For me this chapter was currently the 2nd most important one for Fleur as we saw the transition from whom she used to be to the one she will later become.
The stranger asked, “Where they always this bad?”
Were*
“I go were I am told, and keep my complaints to myself.”
Where*
Hate to be a stick in the mud like this but someone's gotta do it
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Thanks for pointing them out!
PAUL STOP PLEASE MY FEELS
I'm glad that you went through these scenes, in fact. It gives us some further character development between these two, and it gave me some punches right to the feels along the way. Thanks Paul!