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Finally, you mentioned AppleJack. This makes me happy.
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Eh, you didn't do too badly with the Spanish. Then again, I am five years out of practice. So take that as you will. Then again, I did automatically translate it, then go back to check if it was in English or not.
back once again
6341297 Indeed I am!
6341130 Well, so long as it wasn't blatantly awful, I'll take what I can get. This story is for fun, after all.
There has been quite a bit of talk about a "lack" of magic in this world. I remember a few chapters back the good Doctor Higher saying something about the Princesses sucking it right out of the atmosphere for reasons yet unknown.
With what seems to be a war on the horizon (suggested by the weapons factory right outside of Sauna Pai) and the fact that Equestrian authorities seem to be focused elsewhere - allowing the Saddle Arabians to expand some sort of slave trade into Equestrian soil - this world doesn't seem quite as romantic as usual. The fact that ponies are freely eating meat at all is disturbing in a sense compared to how in other stories, they are squeamish at the mere sight of the meat of a once living animal. The examples are subtle, but if one looks hard enough, they'll see that this story is quite dark.
Now you have me curious as to why Queseque was so interested in that red wine his father was drinking and exactly what the relationship between the Blancas is. Not to mention how the Saddle Arabians and the seemingly forgotten Elton family are going to be of significance to the story, or if they even will be.
6343357 Yeah, this story's gonna be dark alright, believe you me. Also, I'm... surprised at how much you've been paying attention thus far. Lots of others seem to have been more focused on Ladarion and the things this world is throwing his way as opposed to what's been hinted at going on behind the scenes. That's pretty easy to dismiss, though, considering the POV of the story.
Also, I wouldn't be so quick to say that a war is on the horizon, but there is certainly something large enough for the Princesses to essentially be sucking the life out of their subjects and the world itself. Not too many people picked up on that little added detail about the magic a few chapters ago or even brought it up, so I congratulate you for being so observant. The casual meat-eating will be explained further on in the story, as will the Blanca relationship and the Saddle Arabian and Elten presence.
6343378 I am back for this great adventure once more, and I must say, I do wish my contact had a better weapon go use. Tis only just to arm him on his eventful journey. I do wish to him to take down the princess, I unfortunately will not be able to help, for I have become lost in this strange land. I await your word on whare I move
6352350 Know this, fair knight: there is no clear cut "good guy" or "bad guy" on this journey. The Princesses do nothing without good reason and the protagonist simply wants to return to his familiars, not to involve himself with this world's affairs.
6353762 you speek nothing but wisdom, I will grant you that. I will always fight for humanity, no matter the cost. I will take heed in what you say, and I will cool my hatred for the princesses for now. Till we meet again!
Deer fakin gad
Anyway great job dude! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
6365225 And I'm looking forward to getting it to you!
Martian, why did I tell you about your Spanish?
"Senorita"
Should be "SeƱorita"
"Manuelle"
Should be "Manuel"