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OK.... I want some of that stuff you smoke.... It's really strong.
7430287 Well, he did just admit to noticing that this may have inadvertently become a crack fic. The execution is unique, however, and it's nigh impossible to tell what's going to happen next because of that. So if he is smoking something, I hope he keeps it up, especially if it helps him maintain this chapter output.
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7430341 To quote Salvador Dali, "I don't do drugs. I am drugs!"
Silliness aside, while there was likely no harm meant in either of your comments, it can be rather insulting and depreciating to suggest the only way to envision and make creative material is under the influence of drugs. I don't smoke, and I likely never will, especially since I have had many a friendship ruined by the use of drugs. All that is put to writing from me comes from my mind and my mind alone, without the aid of any depressants, hallucinogens, or stimulants. I'm just a person who grows older by the day with a haven of activity fermenting childish and outlandish thought in his head.
Don't assume. It makes an ass out of u and me. Not trying to seem like a killjoy, and I apologize if I do come across as that, but I just want that cleared up.
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Actually what I meant was, that it got a little bit too confusing for me. It wasn't meant to insinuate anything. I personally don't like the "higher power interwenes" angle. It's hard to pull of well. Also makes the actions of the protagonist less meaningful. Doesn't mean it can't be done well. I will reread the last chapters tomorrow when my pc is OK again.
Best regards.
7430441 It is understandable to be confused by the way I choose to write. Hell, I even confuse myself when I stumble over these sometimes absurd ideas most of the time. That being said, I truly appreciate any and all meaningful criticisms on this story. We all have varying tastes, after all, and it's impossible to satisfy every single one.
Yes, the protagonist's actions seem overshadowed by these "higher powers" when he is dragged into their machinations, but he is now taking steps in the interim to make his own decisions uninfluenced by them.
At the end of the day, I'm writing for fun and amusement. If my readers enjoy what I come up with, then I'm happy to please. If they don't, and they don't tell me, then there's no room for improvement on my part. I hope that, aside from the relative smallness of the protagonist at this juncture, you found his ridiculous misadventures to be amusing.
7436718 As I have said, this story has gone dark. A small story for a small audience is fair enough to me. And thanks for the kind words; I try my best.
Why... why the fuck didn't he just stab 'Red' while she was transforming?
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8136241 Well, isn't this a pleasant surprise? I hope you enjoyed the story as far as it's been told, regardless of the dust it's undoubtedly gathered.
For an answer, just imagine how baffled you'd be in Ladarion's shoes were you to come face to face with a terror that stands heads over you and has a penchant for devouring the helpless. It's mostly shock pinning him in place at that instant.
8137045 My fight or flight instincts would make me stab the ever loving fuck out of it. And then stab it some more. And maybe cut off a limb or two.
Update your damned story, Martian! It's been a year and it's about time to shake off the cobwebs!
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Your wish is my command.