The human race is gone, destroyed by their own weapons centuries ago. Having looked everywhere else and with lonliness becoming too much to bear, the last human alive will travel to another dimension entirely, to find...magic...ponies?
Oh man I hope he says to Rainbow "...talking of increasing wing size to accommodate ones mass, how are you able to fly with such small wings?" "SMALL WINGS!? WHY I AUGHTA.." "I could double your wing size too if you wish"
Ok i know i haven't read this story yet but i have to say that after reading its premise i have to give it an advance like and fave. Way to go and make an original spin on the HiE genre *claps*.
What can i say? I'm a sucker for good labels and premises.
Hopefully the story itself is as good (or better) as its well written premise, or more importantly i hope i find the time to read all of its released chapters soon.
5983671 Got some mail for you Twilight. Bill...Bill... Invite to a party... one titled "Enlarge your horn now!!!" Throw that one in the bin. Wait, how did you pronounce multiple exclamation marks? ...It's all in the moustache.
5983671 Wow...first off thanks for the comments and criticism, really helps my stories improve. Second, glad to see you like the wings, I'm not much of a drawer myself so if you ever do get around to that sketch I'd love to see it. To answer your question, on the inside Ganymede doesn't normally have working organs unless he goes through the trouble of making temporary artificial ones. Otherwise besides a pair of glowing eyes he looks pretty much the same as before he became a giant mass of nanomachines. Hope you like the rest of my story as it develops.
5989652 Hey I said I'd reply whenever possible and I meant that. Besides I'm genuinely interested in seeing what readers like you visualize from the discriptions in my story.
Well its rare i say something like this but......im impress and i will explain why.
Most of the time when i read the first story a guy write on this site(cause i dont if its your first ever writen.) its rarely good or well writen and most of the time it goes to fast and is full of error(Okay error doesn't bother me that much but theres some you cant simply pass without cringing when you spot them).
Also im not a fan of stories with multiple perspective.But yours,YOURS.....is pretty well done.
What im trying to say is that your story have picked my interest because its well writen,good to read,we dont know that much on Ganymede past so it make us want to know more about the poor guy and we can actually see who is talking.you would be surprise in how much story you can read something like this ("PIZZA,I WANT PIZA!!!!" Bob said"but we dont have electricty dude""SHUT UP BRIAN!!!You're not here to complain but to cook")
You see this,its horrible.Theres big ass letter,its full of errors and we dont even know who is talking.Its actually 3 guy in this order Bob,Brian and a nameless jerk that we will name Steak.(yes i just created this masterpiece)
That why im impress.Your story is not a big pile of nonsensical shit-explosion everywhere
Anyway i will stop crying like a baby and actually finish with this. Your story may just begin but i love it and i cant wait for the next update you'll do because i think it will be a good story.
At least for now
i hope i didn't offend or bored you with this enormous text i can be a little of a whiners sometime and i can go out of context really fast
Now i'll go put this story in my Tracking,Follow you and freaking go to sleep. bye bye
6004443 Wow thanks for the wonderful comment, I love seeing comments like yours it really makes me feel appreciated, especially since it is in fact my first fic. Also I would like to appologise for how long the fourth chapter is taking, I have had to juggle school, family and loads of other problems that keep popping up but I'm working on it so don't worry, I value comments like this too much to give up on this story.
Hold up so is he a human or is he a machine becuse it would be a waste to transform his body in to another body that looks like a human body or did i miss something?
Oh man I hope he says to Rainbow "...talking of increasing wing size to accommodate ones mass, how are you able to fly with such small wings?"
"SMALL WINGS!? WHY I AUGHTA.."
"I could double your wing size too if you wish"
IT'S MY SISTER AND I!!!!!
and stop starting every sentence with WELL!!!!
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
5979727
Well...
5980325
bruh....
Ok i know i haven't read this story yet but i have to say that after reading its premise i have to give it an advance like and fave. Way to go and make an original spin on the HiE genre *claps*.
What can i say? I'm a sucker for good labels and premises.
Hopefully the story itself is as good (or better) as its well written premise, or more importantly i hope i find the time to read all of its released chapters soon.
Definitely a great read. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
5979567
SEE HOW THIS ONE MARE DOUBLED HER WING SIZE
YOU WONT BELIEVE IT
THE PHARMACEUTICAL COMPANIES DON'T WANT YOU TO KNOW THIS ONE SECRET
5983671
Got some mail for you Twilight. Bill...Bill... Invite to a party... one titled "Enlarge your horn now!!!"
Throw that one in the bin. Wait, how did you pronounce multiple exclamation marks?
...It's all in the moustache.
5983671
Wow...first off thanks for the comments and criticism, really helps my stories improve. Second, glad to see you like the wings, I'm not much of a drawer myself so if you ever do get around to that sketch I'd love to see it. To answer your question, on the inside Ganymede doesn't normally have working organs unless he goes through the trouble of making temporary artificial ones. Otherwise besides a pair of glowing eyes he looks pretty much the same as before he became a giant mass of nanomachines.
Hope you like the rest of my story as it develops.
5984090
its OK, I'm not exactly much of a table
it feels nice when the author of a decent story replies to something stupid you said...
thank you
5989652
Hey I said I'd reply whenever possible and I meant that.
Besides I'm genuinely interested in seeing what readers like you visualize from the discriptions in my story.
Well its rare i say something like this but......im impress and i will explain why.
Most of the time when i read the first story a guy write on this site(cause i dont if its your first ever writen.) its rarely good or well writen and most of the time it goes to fast and is full of error(Okay error doesn't bother me that much but theres some you cant simply pass without cringing when you spot them).
Also im not a fan of stories with multiple perspective.But yours,YOURS.....is pretty well done.
What im trying to say is that your story have picked my interest because its well writen,good to read,we dont know that much on Ganymede past so it make us want to know more about the poor guy and we can actually see who is talking.you would be surprise in how much story you can read something like this
("PIZZA,I WANT PIZA!!!!" Bob said"but we dont have electricty dude""SHUT UP BRIAN!!!You're not here to complain but to cook")
You see this,its horrible.Theres big ass letter,its full of errors and we dont even know who is talking.Its actually 3 guy in this order Bob,Brian and a nameless jerk that we will name Steak.(yes i just created this masterpiece)
That why im impress.Your story is not a big pile of nonsensical shit-explosion everywhere
Anyway i will stop crying like a baby and actually finish with this.
Your story may just begin but i love it and i cant wait for the next update you'll do because i think it will be a good story.
At least for now
i hope i didn't offend or bored you with this enormous text i can be a little of a whiners sometime and i can go out of context really fast
Now i'll go put this story in my Tracking,Follow you and freaking go to sleep. bye bye
6004443
Wow thanks for the wonderful comment, I love seeing comments like yours it really makes me feel appreciated, especially since it is in fact my first fic. Also I would like to appologise for how long the fourth chapter is taking, I have had to juggle school, family and loads of other problems that keep popping up but I'm working on it so don't worry, I value comments like this too much to give up on this story.
6006877 That good.We all have a life behind the stuff we make after all
6008898
Too true
Hold up so is he a human or is he a machine becuse it would be a waste to transform his body in to another body that looks like a human body or did i miss something?