The human race is gone, destroyed by their own weapons centuries ago. Having looked everywhere else and with lonliness becoming too much to bear, the last human alive will travel to another dimension entirely, to find...magic...ponies?
Next chapter plz its great i mwan another fic where a human is found alone but he finds Equestria and then some wierd questions arise but in the end something awesome happens keep on writing my friend
God that was indeed great... uhhhh *shivers* its so damn refreshing!!! --- Some personal notes 1.
Of course that led him to the thought, why make a high-speed jetpack with wings for stability when you could make fully fuctional and stable wings with high-speed jets inside them. Having turned what was left of Earth into a giant, semi-living computer, he had enough proscessing power to have the problems licked in barely a year. The design he ended up with resulted in sharp and slick looking wings fit for an angel, with the speed and horsepower of a souped up fighter jet on steroids, capable of going from a static hover to faster than the speed of sound in just 3 seconds. That last part was a little tricky at first, but he managed to make a highly energy efficient engine that could be fitted snugly underneath each feather in a wing.
Nerdgasm intensifies. I love to see what these wings look like in sketch... heck i might even draw it myself.
2. I don't want to be a spelling-nazi but I cant help but notice a few typos and word confusions here and there:
He realized that the probability of an alternate dimension not having any life in it was a solid 50\50 chance, but his life experiences didn't exactly make him feel very confidant about this.
it should be confident
Then came the 80 or so years afterwords that he spent searching the entire galaxy for other intelligent life, and again the answer was nothing.
should be afterwards
Ganymede began to dispair but just pushed his thoughts back.
should be despair
Princess Luna was in her bedroom busily reading a rather intreagueing book she recently bought from a bookstore in Ponyville,
capable of going from a static hover to faster than the speed of sound in just 3 seconds
The g-forces the wings would make will literally rip his spine out of him, unless he thought about improving himself genetically allowing his body to withstand it.
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You got yourself a good story here, may want to work a little on Luna's ye olde speech, but i will be watching.
Next chapter plz its great i mwan another fic where a human is found alone but he finds Equestria and then some wierd questions arise but in the end something awesome happens keep on writing my friend
God that was indeed great... uhhhh *shivers* its so damn refreshing!!!
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Some personal notes
1.
Nerdgasm intensifies. I love to see what these wings look like in sketch... heck i might even draw it myself.
2. I don't want to be a spelling-nazi but I cant help but notice a few typos and word confusions here and there:
it should be confident
should be afterwards
should be despair
should be intriguing.
So far thats all i detected.
The g-forces the wings would make will literally rip his spine out of him, unless he thought about improving himself genetically allowing his body to withstand it.
Just a thought