Yo man, another awesome chapter! /) keep up the great work!

A little sketchy on the grammer, but an interesting concept none the less. I will follow this to see where it goes.

Do you really want the language to be the same? A language barrier can introduce much drama.

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Yeah, I considered having a language barrier in the story, but considering that Ganymede basically has a planet sized computer available to him I just didn't think it would take him long to bypass the barrier so I dropped it.
Besides, it being an alternate dimension and all, having their language be the same isn't too far fetched. If the story took place in the same dimension I would have included a barrier regardless.

Hey a Code Geass reference!

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I haven't watched any Code Geass before, where's the reference?

Short, yet sweet. Spelling/grammar could use a little work, and there are some parts that you may add to to make it better, but overall I am liking this. The story has potential to be great.

So don't fuck it up, or else I am gonna have to stab a bitch.

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Ha, wanna stab me come find be bitch!

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In all seriousness though if you guys feel there are parts I should work on, feel free to point them out, I'm flexible enough for suggestions.

Please... more. I need my fix man!

5965970 The Ganymede. It's a prototype knightmare in Code Geass. It was piloted by Marianne vi Britannia, mother of Nunnally and Lelouch. While it isn't a mech here, it's still a machine with a man in it.

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First technically he's a human consciousness/soul in a machine (a ghost in a machine if you will)
Second, honestly I just named him after the moon orbiting Saturn by the same name.

One question good author. I'm a bit confused... what does ganymede look like again? Does he look more human than a machine? In angel's description he certainly did so. Thnx in advance